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Wow. This is nice. Where did Lily and James get their connection thing?? anyway, update soon. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I sort of made up the connection, but it'll be important later in the story. |
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I don't think that there is nothing at all wrong with this chapter. I think that the chapter is perfect or what I read of it already. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm hoping to update soon... sorry for the long wait... :S |
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I don't think that there is nothing at all wrong with this chapter. I think that the chapter is perfect or what I read of it already. |
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getting interesting now... it would be so cool to have a connection with someone like that. being able to talk through minds, i mean. can't wait for the next installment, happy writing! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I'm hoping to get the new chapter up soon, sorry for the long wait.
I'd love to be able to talk through minds.  |
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Author Feedback: Wow, what a coincidence!
I will give you a hint on Jamie-poo: he is finding Juliet. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/05/06
bloody brilliant. i mean it. pure perfectness. keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chappie! |
Author Feedback: Wow. I don't think it's QUITE that good, but thanks anyway!! |
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I liked the chapter, it was interesting. And I like how you've started to draw in the intensity of young love. I didn't get all the american references though...like a "martha moment" and "prep" and other things like that though. |
Author Feedback: Ah. Sorry, I'm kind of writing Americanized over here.
Martha Stewart: A weird lady on TV who makes rooms look pretty and cooks etc. She annoys the hell outa me. She got arrested a few years ago, though; I think she got a tip-off about her stock or something and she freaked out and invested like crazy or something. No idea.
Prep: Someone, in my opinion, who is really annoying, sugary, the perfect little [lady/ gentleman] and is a miserble suck-up fit only to lick slime from your shoes.If you are one of them, I mean that in the good way, of course. It's just they irritate me, is all. |
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PLEASE MISCHIEF MANAGED! I'm begging you to update, I need some closure... |
Author Feedback: I'm so sorry, I thought I had replied to you about that.... Well, I think you reviewed on the last update, and so now I shall reply to that one. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/04/06
this is cool! never read a fic. like this before. cant wait for the next chappie! |
Author Feedback: Well, it's here now! (finally......) |
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samUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/04/06
ur story and ur plot is just awesome. It is going to be very interesting if they can read each others mind u know, u cud make it dirty also if u want. neways i wud b following ur story whichever rating it gets. update soon. |
Author Feedback: Uh, NO. It will NOT be dirty. James will be hoping, (Later on, though; eleven is a BIT too early to be perverted....) but it ain't gonna happen. Thanks for reviewing!!! |
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wow! i like where this is going. i have a friend who has the whole colour/word thing happening too. can't wait for the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: OH THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOO COOL!!! About your friend, I mean. I would  to have synesthesia. I should be able to update this weekend!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/04/06
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Author Feedback: Thanks!! But hopefully (I haven't got it all planned out; I'm letting nature take its course) this story won't be ALL fluff. Hopefully it'll have a bit of a plot thing.  |
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Oh damn, you got my hopes up big time for another chapter *starts crying*...anyway, hope all goes well with writing your 3rd chapter. |
Author Feedback: *Cries* I hope I do too!! Thanks for the review, and I PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE it'll be up before 12 p.m. (My time) on Sunday!!! *Is nervous* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/03/06
Awsome story so far keep writing I am so keeping this story on my faorites list GO YOU!!!!!!!   |
Author Feedback: OMG you are so nice!! And thanks for putting me on your favorites list. That's cool. I may be able to post this weekend; it depends on how much I get done with school and everything and how fast my beta edits (she's pretty fast), but it should be up by Tuesday (next, on the 3rd? 4th? something like that.....). Thank you for the awesome review!! |
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I am loving this story. Lily is so quirky and cute...and I adore stories that portray Lily as not-flawless. James is a sweetheart. And I love the idea of his mother being prejudiced against muggleborns and having "old money", so to speak.
Especially with the release of " the black family tree" (the one that was auctioned off for charity), which had the the potter's interwoven, I'm glad of the way you've depicted James' parents.
 Looking forward to updates... |
Author Feedback: Thank you! And I didn't want to portray Lily as the most popular person ever everybody loves her yaddayaddayadda because that gets SOOOOOOOO boring. And then my entire plot would go down the pipes. James's mum is one of my fave characters. She's so retarded and mean, it just cracks me up. |
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