hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/12/06
aaww,,, hermione's always like that huh?..she thinks she's not pretty and will never be..but, we needn't worry coz harry's always there to make her feel the prettiest and most beautiful girl in the whole muggle and wizarding world!!!!! |
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Mage_13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
ok, you asked, so i reviewed.. I have to tell you that it's very nice, though a bit short, but it really doesn't matter... Quality is better than quantity...
Keep 'em coming!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/06
VERY NICE. VERY CUTE. JUST THE HARRY/HERMOINE FIX THAT I NEED. KEEP IT UP. |
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Sweet, loved reading your little one-shot. great work, and I don't know why you said to scroll down and skip this story. I actually enjoyed it. |
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Sort of a song fic -- is there such a category as phrase fic?
I liked it. Hermione is still a little bit insecure, but Harry should be able to convince her she has no reason to be. Nicely done. |
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Aww, that was sweet. I think all of us harmony shippers need a little fluff in our life. Thanks luv. |
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it was cute. yes, i took the time and i wanted portkey points/ lol. but it was cute. i guess a little cheesy or i don;t know... |
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Bra4gotenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/06
I thought it ws very nicely done. Harry should see what a wonderful girl Hermione would be for him. |
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MikeyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/06
Squee! (Guess who) Admitted I'm not a fan of the pairing, but somehow I always seem to love your fics. Yay! for the fluff P.Poo. (No, matika is not with me at the moment  )
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/06
I think that it's a good start but I think it would have been cool if you started with like flashback of how they met and then came to her diary. Oh well you already wrote it but hey I still LOVE IT! |
Author Feedback: that's actually a really good idea.  i should have done that! unfortunately i have no idea how to begin fics generally speaking (i have tried several times) and i think i'd probably just muck it up.
however i could always add it after the diary entry...
thank you for the compliment |
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I liked it.
I loved how you used lines from the book to make it all the more real. It gives me hope that just because were not cannon doesn't mean were delusional. I just love how Harry goes through it anyway's he's such a dork lol.
But I think it was adorable I really loved it!! |
Author Feedback: did it seem real???
that's brilliant!!!
harry is such a dork - but we love him for it anyway! |
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good job, it was a great fisrt attempt. very sweet for all us hopeless romantics. |
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j4t2Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/06
Actually, I thought a woman would key in more on the privacy violation of reading her diary versus the loving words of her husband. I liked your reverse psychology of saying to scroll on by and not read this.
Everybody needs regular positive re-enforcement to maintain their egos, especially creative persons as yourself. Great storyline! Well written! Nice job!
I like the shorter stories better. |
Author Feedback: it actually wasn't meant to be reverse psychology. thank you, the compliments give me the courage to keep on writing. |
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Oh! That was so cute! I love a joy crying Hermione and especially when Harry acts like that towards her!
Short, but cute! Well done! |
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