I realize I've already reviewed this, but I want to say again how great it is. Upon second thought, you do have Luna's character down more than I originally thought you were. The adoration of Luna's thoughts towards Ron were just great! Can't Wait to read more . . .

What a wonderful piece of Luna/Ron fluff! I loved this. The perspective from Luna was really interesting to read and was engaging-- I felt it could've been a little more unpredictable as Luna is, but overall it was great. You take your time and don't go into lengthy paragrphs. We need all the Ron/Luna smuttiness we can get, and what a wonderful way to get it! Keep up the great work!

I like the luna in this she is a great mix of the odd and not too odd Lunas others try to write.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

this is very good, well done i like the way you never let us know who they are til the end, god work!

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What a beautiful piece of work dedicated to the wonderful love that is married love. It's not often you can get the "sweetness" of it combined so well with the "hotness" of it.

I adored the details of his "stripping" on his way to the shower. It was perfectly shown. What man hasn't left a trail of clothes and crums on his way through the house??

Another standing ovation for you from me!! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next piece of wonderfulness (Hooligan or other!!! )

Good job! I don't usually read R/L but I should. This was very nice, you got Luna's character very well. Loved the death-life juxtaposition. Thanks for a good read!

Aww! There truly aren't enough R/LL stories, are there? This is very sweet.

I love the way you write...you capture the beauty of every moment so vividly. Bravo!

Thanks for sharing this. And feel free to write plenty more R/LL.

Great job!

Terri

P.S. I owe you an email...I wonder if you remember. Sorry that it's taken me so long to reply.

Beautiful piece of work.