Once again, a beautifully written short story depicting a moment in the lives in Harry and Hermione, a simple moment that hints so evocatively at so much more. I love your writing.

Aw, I lost the review I've written earlier.

Anyway, one thing I hate most in fics is when someone writes that Hermione and Ron had a sexual relationship.

So I definitely love this story because you wrote here that they didn't.

And I kind of like the directness of this story, too. Sometimes, simplicity is good.

interesting piece... I like the way you write... it's like... something is lurking there and you know it but it's not quite... totally awesome... loved it...

Love it. I REALLY don't know what else to say! I could go on and on about how implied H/Hr is SO much better than the real thing, but you know how much it is already
Good job! I must say that I'm a real addict of your fics, please NEVER, EVER, stop writing!

Musca....

Wow. That is just... wow. You're one of the few authors that could do this thing with words and tell a story and let the story flow beautifully.. am I making sense? I love this piece. You, my darling, is one hell of a writer. Keep it up.

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Hehe...perhaps Harry can join Hermione in bed to keep her warm. ^_^

i really liked the end but it is screaming a sequel!!!
anyways well done!

"For a moment they’re unsure how to arrange their bodies. But then something else kicks in, their limbs deciding to negotiate the situation with grace. Her cheek finds that it’s rather nice to be pressed into the hollow of his shoulder. He finds that his arm quite likes the weight of her head and the texture of her hair. He mutters a spell to make the couch big enough for both of them, but her legs realise they don’t need all that space; hooked over his is just fine. He warms at the touch of her breasts against his side with the rhythm of her heart nearby. Her skin settles into the warmth of his."

The imagery here is just brilliant. Wonderful job.

I had forgotten to look at the author before clicking on the fic but about five sentences in I thought "Oh, it's something Ama wrote". You have such a distinctive style and I am so. Very. Jealous.

I loved that one little part about the porch and how it reflects the trio's personalities. It's little details like that I love.

And the ending was perfect. Sort of funny, sort of fluffy, sort of wistful. You got it all!

Claire

Aww I liked this story! Long time since you wrote something, glad your back It was a nice one shot and I really enjoyed it! thanks for writing it

I loved this the first time I read it on your LJ and it was a pleasure to reread. I'm glad that you posted it here so everyone can enjoy this lovely scene.

I like imagining Harry walking up the stairs just a minute or two after Hermione, pausing by her door to wish her good night, and then...well. I don't mean to bother you about a continuation of the story (it's perfect as it is), but...well.


CF4B

I love the way you write, it's so unfair.

There's so much potential in this story--not that it's not gorgeous on its own--it just has so many wonderful places it could go from here. There's so much that could be explored. I love the tentative hold Harry and Hermione have on something that could be amazing, but they're so unsure and just nervous, I guess. I'd be so happy to see a sequel or another part, where they clear the air about a lot of things. Please say you'll continue!?

hmm.. is this it? or will there be more? Nice job, either way.. though it leaves me anyway hanging.. lol.. good thing ron wasn't there for that spider.. or maybe that would've made him like the cat, lol.

Yet another wonderful, perfect slice of life, without a word extra or out of place. Lovely images and poetic desriptions. Utterly touching their cuddle on the couch at first ackward then magical. The last few lines, Harry asking if theres someone ealse, her look and then "Maybe" Wow I never knew I could be so moved by such a simple word. So simple yet so beautiful. And the comparison of their budding realationship to a night flowering plant, brilliant. And the last line, him hoping she is cold, breathtaking. As I think someone ealse said, I'd love to see another chapter but its so perfect like this, it is probable best to leave it alone. Still...
Anyway lovely story, Always great to read your work.
Cheers,
Tim

Oh, what a great story. The ending was just perfect! Your writing seems almost poetic; I especially loved the line about the nightflowering plants. Everything in here was just gorgeous! I have to read this again sometime!