Aw, What a cute ending! I'm glad Ron made up with Harry and Hermione. What an excellent idea for the E.L.F. to travel to Ireland together.

That was such a cute story! Keep up the good work!

Wow, now I'm seriously interested. Kinda reminds me of sixth year and all. It's getting good

I really do agree with Hermione. That's really silly. But I liked it! I'll read the next chapter and see how this wicked story turns out

As silly and lighthearted as this story started as, it became quite a dark and drery affair towards the end. I love that.
It creates a perfect parallel to what you were trying to show about the loss of innocence and the such...
very cute and very sweet. Thank you

Hm, interesting. I liked it, no, I really did. Bravo! Bravo!

That's a pretty cute story. I can't believe your school has banned Harry Potter though! The outrage! Don't tell me you live near Laura Mallory, because if so, I feel sorry you (not that I don't already, but hopefully you understand what I mean). Well, I hope that this does not deter you from writing more, but actually spurs you on to write more in retalliation. Honestly, ban Harry Potter, what were those people thinking?! Ok, enough ranting and raving. Keep writing and I hope that you have a good semester. Till next time.

That was a lovely job on the fic. I am glad tos ee that Ron finally admitted that he was stupid and it was really cute. Lovely little job

Sorry that your teacher had to ban HP. It's ridicilous for you. I hope that you can get some more writing done.

Well that was really interesting. I could see Ron doing something like it. Well, sometimes people are analytical on here...but whatevr. I think this story does very well of capturing the childlike nature of the Trio.

Well this is quite interesting. I wouldn't think that any of the characters would act as this carefree, but then again, from the setting that you are writing, they're all fourteen. It makes me happy. I love the fact that Harry is acting extremely weird and that Hermione is acting extremely weird also. It also is cool that you have her questioning why she is doing it.

What a stupid teacher for banning Harry Potter books!!! hehehe! You should take it to the school district or something...hehe!!! Thanks for Updating!!! I love all your stories!!! I hope you UPDATE SOON!!!

what???? no harry & hermy shagging? boring!!!!! harry and hermy neds to shag.

There goes Ron with his being a total jerk. I'm glad Harry took Hermione's side. Yay Harry/Hermione. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Ahem... Say what?

While I can get faint impression of what you are trying to say, the medium used is frankly... pathetic. And highly tedious. Try doing this in a more layered manner, perhaps.

that was so adorable. Aww, poor hermione, she's so heart broken. Harry's as kind as ever and Ron's as stupid as ever. Nice job on this story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter/addition to this story.