aaaawwww.... oh my gosh... i like it soooo much..u are good, a little angsty coz hermione received a very painful cruciatus but she did it for harry...and harry didn't wasted another chance by not letting her go....u are good, my friend!!!!!!!!


I support the good ship!!!
I support h/hr!!!!
Go, Harmony.....

so sweet = you just know that hermione would do that for him, no matter what pairings JKR gives us, hermione will always protect harry. yay

wow! that was a very powerful one-shot. i like hermione's protectiveness of harry. it seemed really appropriate. wonderfully happy ending!

i love this story, but what i don't understand is did harry defeat voldy? great story!

i think that it was a little rushed.. u could have put more details into it or something... i dunno im not a writer. i just think it all went a bit fast. maybe if u had made two chapters... other than that it was a great story.

"Disclaimer- JK would never write something as sappy-sticky-icky-sweet as this…I hope. I think she could pull it off much better than I. And therefore, you know I don't own it. Otherwise Harry Potter wouldn't be nearly as well-written and well-known."
o_O Did you read her last book? Don't criticise yourself so bad... this is a wonderful "sappy-sticky-icky-sweet" story
Thanks for writing
Lie

Very nice one-shot.. Would have like a little more romance, but overall very nice... If Jo would only realize that Harry and Hermione need to be together...

This is so cute. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it!

That was really sweet. The ending ended a little too quickly for my liking. That's just me. It went from them being together to them dying. I understand how you wanted to end it, but the transition here "they were closer than ever. Together they married," surprised me. I really liked it. Hope this helped you

That was amazing. Great story. I really thought he was going to die. Hermione's willingness to sacrifice herself for Harry no matter what never ceases to amaze me. That was a beautiful story. Nice job

awww that was realyl cute i liked it, really grat job, it was really good! ! ! ! ! ! !

Aww, that was sweet! I'm glad Hermione got to save Harry. LOL, this was far better than the dysfunctional R/Hr and the out of left field H/G that J.K. gave us in HBP!

That was such a sweet story!!! I loved it sooo much! I love the way Hermione was willing to give herself up for Harry and get hit with the Crusiatus Curse! I just wish it was a little more detailed... like maybe Harry telling Hermione afterwards how Voldemort was defeated or something, so that we would know... and I would have also liked to know how long Hermione was asleep and how badly both Harry and Hermione were really injured/how long it took Harry to get better, etc, etc... but this was sweet! Short but sweet! I loved it! You're a great writer!!!
-Michelle

AWWWWWW SUPER SWEET ... err yea. maybe I happen to have taken a little to much sugar into me system. hmm. great story! just like every other one though so ... yea you know what? This stinks! your too good a writer!

Hey thats was really awesome. I love the idea for the plot. Just one thing bugs me though. This was the final battle with Voldemort and the characters are just carrying on conversations as there battling. I know you said they were only Voldemorts underlings but still. And they can just skip off and go nap? I hope I am not sounding to negative because I really did like your story. I'm happy everything worked out in the end. I love the idea of them being burried next to Harry's parents. So cute!!