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Leah Car
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
'The tension in the air was palpable. Waves of anger and hatred were rolling off of Ginny as she narrowed her eyes at the figure across the room. She almost extended her wand arm, but felt her fingers twitch at the emptiness. Casting a quick glance at her bedside table, she mentally berated herself for not having it with her. Of course, her wand hadn't seemed so imperative when she was welcoming her live-in boyfriend, and soon-to-be fiancé, from work. Then again, neither did my undergarments, she thought to herself as she spied a pair of lacy knickers hanging of the arm of the chair to her left. Suddenly the figure started to move, abruptly pulling Ginny out of her reverie. Tensing her body for combat, Ginny mused to herself that her wand would be really helpful at a time like this. ' might intro Draco sooner.

'"Ginny Weasley," he stated, in his most solemn voice despite the silly grin that had finally taken over his face. "Be my wife." And with that he held out his left arm high, presenting in his palm the most hideous piece of jewelry Ginny had ever laid eyes on. She picked up the proffered ring, and rolled it around her fingers a few times. The iron-wrought work on the band was so overly ornate and heavy that she barely even noticed the diamond. A diamond that was encased by, what else, entwined dragon tails. The whole thing was studded with emeralds, and screamed gaudy in the worst sense of the word. Ginny was about to say something to that effect, and had even opened her mouth and started to form the words, but choked on them. This was probably the silliest proposal that she had ever received. Never mind that it was the only proposal that she had ever received. ' and '"I knew you'd come around." He grinned at her and started pulling at the cord that held her dressing gown shut. "Help me out here; I want to have a romp in the sac with my fiancée." Ginny giggled and slithered out of the cloth.' what is this rated? it's rated G, get a new rater.
 

Mayuka-chan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/03/06
^_^ This was amusing and I loved every bit of it, quite cute!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/06
hahahahahahaa...by the end of the story i was laughing histerically rolling around on the floor!! GREAT JOB!!
in the beginning it didnt really seem like a funny story, but when u spoke about her wearing it, it was just really funny!! fantastic! keep up the great work!!
 

Alexandria Malfoy
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/06
Loved it. I didn't expect the gaudiness of the ring, but still, the story was great all the same. Great job! xoxox
 

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