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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/03/06
Fantastic story!!! I can't wait until you update it. Wonder who the mole is? Please update soon.
Lady Chancellor
Author Feedback: Glad your enjoying it. Who the mole is won't be really important to the story. Thanks!
 

Sabine
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/03/06
I'm really, really enjoying this story! All of the characters are spot on, only with a few years of maturity and experience tacked on. I can't wait to get to the part where Harry and Hermione consciously say 'I love you' to each other!
Author Feedback: Thanks!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/03/06
this story is absolutely wonderful so far! please update real SOOOOON!
Author Feedback: Thanks!
 

emerald iris
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/03/06
This story is great! I can't wait until you update. I love how Ron is so mature.
Author Feedback: Thanks! I mature Ron too!
 

emerald iris
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/06
I do like this story so far. I look forward to the next chapter. I am glad that Ron gets to play the hero sometimes!
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alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/03/06
Oh that;s cute. an unconcious reply. But pitty he didn't realise that he could dive under the covers with her and make her warmer!
Author Feedback: Yeah I thought about doing that. But Hermione is recovering some serious injuries so if Harry were to lay down with her on the tiny couch it wouldn't be very comfortable for her. So he had her well being in mind. Thanks for the review.
 

Tlatoani
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/06
Great story!! You really left me wondering who the traitor will be... Just hope not Ron because i really love him while reading... great, great job!!
Author Feedback: Thanks! No no it's definitely not Ron, so you don't have worry. I couldn't bare it if Ron betrayed his friends, I love him to pieces! Who the traitor is really isn't a major point in the story. Thanks for the great review!
 

vbks
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/03/06
that was wonderful! i like the way u ended the chapter.hope u post soon.cannot wait for the next chapter and also for unfulfilled birthday!
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reddfire
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/03/06
Nice job. This story is coming along quite nicely. I'm glad you made Luna a healer, she seems like she'd be a good healer. I think that if I were Harry, I would be rather happy I killed goyle too; wrong or not. Anyways, off point. Your doing a great job, and I praise you for your work. DO KEEP IT UP! lol, so long!

Reddfire

P.s: Update soon!
Author Feedback: Aww thanks ! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
 

Reesegirl4610
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/03/06
I love it when Ron knows more than Harry! So good. Keep writing!
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Caity
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/03/06
aww!! this is such a cute story so far. i mean definitely some parts are sad but the h/hr part is cute.

ron is hilarious! i love ron! i like how you had him do an intrepretation of hermione while talking to harry. it was funny. made me laugh lol.

i feel so bad that bill and fluer died. and their unborn child as well. they would have been a cute little family. oh and you said that fluer's grandmother died too right? thats so sad .

anyway, good story so far! i look forward to the rest.



ps: a casualty is someone who died in war so if hermione didnt die then she is not one of them. just letting you know. (sorry im a grammer freak!)
Author Feedback: Thanks for the wonderful review. I got that casualty thing now thanks. Thats ones thing I don't like about PK when you find a mistake in your story you can't just go fix it. You need to deleted your entry and repost it and lose all your reviews. Thanks again. Glad you enjoyed it.
 

the_kid
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/03/06
sweet chapter please update soon....I really like this story and its real interesting.....
Author Feedback: Thanks!!
 

HarrysAngel
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/03/06
*wipes away tears* Oh wow. That is so terribly sad. Fleur...pregnant...god...I have no words to even begin to say how sad that is. And Harry, wow, he is amazing as always. I love how he so protective of Hermione even though she would kill him for it haha. His love for her really shows.

Especially when he almost wouldn't let Luna take care of her. I liked when Ron said he might graduate to the emotional range of a spatual haha. The humor was well placed. Harry's confession about how he feels after killing someone makes sense. Keep up the good work.
Author Feedback: Wow, thanks for the great review. I like reviews like this.
 

canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/03/06
It's amazing, omg I love it.

you have an amazing gift, you're a really gifted writer

keep it up
-megz-
Author Feedback: Awww thanks !! I really appreciate that. of coarse I don't agree, but thank you!
 

Horcrux Seeker
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/03/06
Awww! So sweet having Hermione replying to Harry on reflex

I take it from the conversation between Harry and Ron that Harry and Hermione aren't in a relationship--yet?

Great Chapter--keep updating please
Author Feedback: thanks! No Harry and Hermione arn't a couple yet. Thanks for the review.
 

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