I really thought he was going to take her suggestion and kiss the one he loves. Oh, well, maybe next time.

I think that was really, really lovely. Very lyrical, but very much in character as well. I love the hopefulness of the ending.

It comes across very purely, as if it poured out of you. Don't know if that's the case, but thanks so much for taking the time to post & share it. Math is over rated

Is this a one shot. It says in progress but your AN makes it feel like a one-shot. I would certainly like to see how Hermione gets Harry to "jump" so to speak.

Well this is definitely better than maths, lol.

I'd love you to continue this wonderful random. I will be eagerly eaiting to see Harry jumping after taking Hermione's hand

hugs!

One shot? Well, was a great one shot. I loved it, really did, loved Hermione's speech too, on the doing big and little, simple things. Really touched me.

Intresting point of view! I enjoyed it.. . It wasn't fluff but it was and it wasn't something off HPB but it was and it felt good to be able to read a semi non fluff story that is just plain old awesome! Keep writing... And by the way I'm supposed to be doing my yuck History homework I thought harry potter was much more important! HEE HEE

oh i can this turning into an absolutely brilliant story! I'm excited now! This was great, I hope you decied to do more with it!!

A nice one shot, and I think, a reasonable projection of one possible outcome after the war. Harry's already lost so much, if the war costs him even more he may go into such a withdrawal as a defense mechanism. The problem with building a shell, however, is that sometimes it's hard to make your way back out again. Nice work.

it was sweet and kind. I liked it a good bit. it seemed so real as how thing's could be after a war and peoples reactions to it. keep it up.

I really liked this... For two reasons, mainly. First: It doesn't scream H/Hr, but you know that's coming...
Second: I love your description about Hermione; her animation, her hair, everything. Really liked that.


Keep it up!

Thanks!
Steph