I suppose you are another American who thinks the whole world is the same as America, well I would like to inform you it is not and good writing needs just a little more research if writing about a country you dont know, Getting a driving license before seventeen is not possible in Britain, just as they dont eat those darn pancakes for breakfast, apart from the glaring Americanisms the story is quite good.

WAYYYYYYY too much fun! I loved it. You've hit on exactly what serendipity means and it's great! Good job I really hope you take up another challenge or fall prey to another plot-bunny.

Regards,

the_scribbler

this was great...when i read the part about when harry met the lady that sold him the car and asked about the date i kinda guessed and thought it would be ironic if his date ended up being hermione...that was cool...good work on this story =)

this was great...when i read the part about when harry met the lady that sold him the car and asked about the date i kinda guessed and thought it would be ironic if his date ended up being hermione...that was cool...good work on this story =)

great story.. loved it. too bad it's only a one-shot.. great job on it though
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dysfunctionalspirit

I didnt quite like the way he kept asking her to do stuff e.g: "I’d like to hold your hand.”( boring!!)and so on ... But the rest of it was o.k

Nicely done - good job Aunt Amy.... I think you revealed Hermione's name too quickly though...

Awww.... *smiling like an idiot* LOVED it! Very sweet, and lovely fic.

I think you did a fabulous job of keeping everyone in character. I really wanted to slug Uncle Vernon there. LOL And Aunt Amy selling the car for that price, and getting such a kick out of doing it -LMAO!

Wonderful job! I can't wait to go read some of your other stories right now.

~Cat

*squeals* wow!! this was an awesome fic! I so loved this fic!! it made me all so fluffy inside(if u get what i mean)

I think you did very well with the challenge. I was much taken by the inadvertant blind date. I've never been that lucky — but then I can hardly remember my blind dating years.
Old Chuck

This was really cute. I enjoyed it a lot. I don't usually read one-shots, but I'm glad I read this one. It had humor and romance and it's great. Keep in that in mind, hon.

i have a feeling i reviewed for this before but i luv it so much i shall again. this is kutie pie. YaY

i really loved it although i think this is the second time i've read this, it seems familiar. but then again i've read alot f stories on portkey. good job!

That was really good, i loved it!!!!! Awesome job! ! ! ! ! ! !

Just wanted to write a quick note saying I loved your story. I'm glad someone took up the challenge. Keep up with the great stories.