All that and you don't like him anymore? Well it was well written none the less, angsty and heartfelt, it was good.

HUm... I usually never read J/L but I like this on!Congratuations!

Yay! See, lying isn't always bad! Especially when it comes to saving James! Lie on, Lily Evans, lie on! lol
Cheers, Moon

Wonderful fic. The ending was... not as I would expect an ending to be, like, you could have added something there, but I still liked it
-Spyro

OMG! This was soo good! I loved it! That was like one of your best.. ok well all of your stories are amazing! They are so adorable! You are by far one of my favorite authors on Portkey! keep up the good work!
x0x0
kaci

i love the story but cringe at the grammar. try slowly reading your stories aloud; you'll catch the big ones.

aW LOL! OMG THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD!! YEA STORIES DONT SEEM THAT LONG WHEN THEIR POSTED BUT WHEN U WRITE THEM, GOSH JUST MY PROLOGUE IS FRICKEN LIKE 2O PGS! I'M SO LAZY TO TYPE IT UP! LOL BUT ANYWHO MATE NOT TALKING BOUT MY STORY, BUT YOURS WICH BY THE WAY KICKS ASS! UGH! THAT WAS SUCH A A GOOD STORY! OF COURSE THEY HAD TO JUST END UP TOGETHER! UGH! SEXY SEXY JAMES! LOL ANYWHO MATE AS ALWAYS WICKED JOB. . AND PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING! KK ADIOS

aW LOL! OMG THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD!! YEA STORIES DONT SEEM THAT LONG WHEN THEIR POSTED BUT WHEN U WRITE THEM, GOSH JUST MY PROLOGUE IS FRICKEN LIKE 2O PGS! I'M SO LAZY TO TYPE IT UP! LOL BUT ANYWHO MATE NOT TALKING BOUT MY STORY, BUT YOURS WICH BY THE WAY KICKS ASS! UGH! THAT WAS SUCH A A GOOD STORY! OF COURSE THEY HAD TO JUST END UP TOGETHER! UGH! SEXY SEXY JAMES! LOL ANYWHO MATE AS ALWAYS WICKED JOB. . AND PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING! KK ADIOS

aW LOL! OMG THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD!! YEA STORIES DONT SEEM THAT LONG WHEN THEIR POSTED BUT WHEN U WRITE THEM, GOSH JUST MY PROLOGUE IS FRICKEN LIKE 2O PGS! I'M SO LAZY TO TYPE IT UP! LOL BUT ANYWHO MATE NOT TALKING BOUT MY STORY, BUT YOURS WICH BY THE WAY KICKS ASS! UGH! THAT WAS SUCH A A GOOD STORY! OF COURSE THEY HAD TO JUST END UP TOGETHER! UGH! SEXY SEXY JAMES! LOL ANYWHO MATE AS ALWAYS WICKED JOB. . AND PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING! KK ADIOS

aW LOL! OMG THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD!! YEA STORIES DONT SEEM THAT LONG WHEN THEIR POSTED BUT WHEN U WRITE THEM, GOSH JUST MY PROLOGUE IS FRICKEN LIKE 2O PGS! I'M SO LAZY TO TYPE IT UP! LOL BUT ANYWHO MATE NOT TALKING BOUT MY STORY, BUT YOURS WICH BY THE WAY KICKS ASS! UGH! THAT WAS SUCH A A GOOD STORY! OF COURSE THEY HAD TO JUST END UP TOGETHER! UGH! SEXY SEXY JAMES! LOL ANYWHO MATE AS ALWAYS WICKED JOB. . AND PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING! KK ADIOS

Haha! Lovely little fic! The only subject worse than science is maths. hate maths. sorry, got a test wednesday. pq formula. horrid. You: great writer. Me: stupid at maths. Got a good heart though. Wish I had a James. Wish I had red hair. Wish I could speak Spanish. Sorry, rambling. You write such sweet stories! WIsh I lived somewhere warm. You are a very productive author, and every single story of yours that I've read, is AMAZING.

I loved this, although I love all your fics... Im just dying for more though... hehe

This story was absolutly amazing and you are my hero. I can understand that fear too. If there was ever a draft- i know he wouldn't waite

That was so wonderful! So heart wrenching, and so beautiful. I dunno what else to say besides the fact that this was beautiful. This is why I don't want som of my guy friends going off to war. They can get hurt.

Ah, well, I loved the married idea. That made me smile.

You need to pay attention in bio missy!

Love, Amanda

this was very, very very very very very very good, but very angsty, but i liked it anyway....but have you not updated your other stories?? like triwizard or where it all went or budding romanace or rude awakenings?!!?! they're soo good and i'm dying to see more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!