HotaruSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
My lord... This is my second time through this and it was a heart-rending as the first. from one person who loves angst to another, 'Applaud' |
Author Feedback: Thanks, you've read it twice? Wow. You're name looks familiar, I think I might have read some of your stuff. Did you write a story to Seether's song "Fine Again?" For some reason, I think you did, lol. I'll check in a second, haha. But thanks, I tried to make it as heart-rendering as I could. I plan on writing more when I have the time. I just have so many stories out at the moment! But thanks for the review!
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In reference to your Author Feedback, I would be flattered to have a Hit Wizard included if you can. Hopefully in a favorable light. We get so little recognition, thoses damn Aurors hog it all. And they're only slightly better trained Hit Wizards, really. lol. Again I'd like to say that was a phenominal first chapter, well done! |
Author Feedback: Lol, yes, damn those bloody Aurors for hogging up the lime light, you'd think they were saving people or something crazy like that with all the recognition they get. Thank you for letting me use the Hit Wizard thing, it just kinda caught my attention, lol. Thanks fore replying, and once again, I'm glad you liked that last chapter!
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/06
That was really good if a bit sad. . . great job though i really loved it and i will look forward to more of your fics! ! ! ! ! ! |
Author Feedback: I know it was sad, almost made me cry while I was writing it. I hope you read a few of my other stories and enjoy them. Thanks for the review!
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A very powerful first chapter to what looks like a fascinating story. Very well written with wonderful use of emotions as Harry goes back through his memories of his relatonship and life with Hermione. And Ron, who has to be devistated in his own way, still tries to help his best mate. Quite an emotional chapter, but I did enjoy it. I wait patiently for the next chapter. Oh, I forgot one more thing, the person or persons involved with what happened to Hermione hopefully are living on borrowed time. When Harry finds them there's going to be hell to pay.(I can wish anyway) |
Author Feedback: Hi, I'm glad you had so much to say about my story. I love when readers analyze a few things that happened, lol. I tried to pour as much emotion in the chapter as I could, which was hard because I'm not very emotionally driven, so I had to guess and just hope for the best on most of it. As for Ron, he had to grow up sometime, and I think that's how he would handle this kind of situation. As for the people who caused what happened to Hermione, I think the line in the movie The Crow says it best "They died the night they touched her, they just don't know it yet." Excellent movie as well. Anyway, yes, there is going to be hell to pay. Thank you so much for your review, I like the name by the way, lol. Would you mind if I mentioned a "hit wizard" in my story if I can work it in? It just came to mind. Anyway, once again, thanks!
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why the hell are you misadvertising by having your lover ray say oh that was such an awesome story you dumb liar. This is a room for good storys |
Author Feedback: Lol, oh please, Ash, get OVER yourself...and you know very well he isn't my lover dammit! But anyway, thanks for the review!
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KilikinaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/06
i absolutely luved the story it was so sad that i cried while reading it. I feel that you have some major talent and keep up the good work. Oh every part of your story is excellent i feel so sorry for harry i mean he had such pure love for her. I really admire you for not making the sex part horny but pure love it was so beautiful  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked the story so much Kilikina, and thanks for the compliment about my talent! Yeah, Harry does have flat out pure love for Hermione. And thanks for mentioning the love-making part and saying it was beautiful, that's what I was shooting for, lol. Thanks for the review, Ash!
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S.K.Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/06
Why do I get the feeling that the police officer who stopped Harry had something to do with it? Anyway, please update soon! Harry and Hermione deserve a happy ever after! Harry and Hermione forever and always!! True Love Conquers All!!
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Author Feedback: Lol, I think you're the only one that mentioned the police officer, and I can't say whether or not he does have something to do with it, BUT nice thinking out of the box. I hope to have an update soon, but I've got a few others I'd like to update, so it won't be too soon, sorry! But thanks for the review!
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Touching, powerful, sad yet there is so much more to come... i look forward to the ext chapter 'innocent' one! that was breath taking i can see why you havent been updating that definately took some serious brainwork and i detect one hell of a plot keep up the great work
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Author Feedback: Lol, thanks for the review, Ray. And it was too innocent dammit! Lol, I hope I can make one hell of a plot out of it, I'll try my best! Anyway, thanks for the review, and I'll talk to you on MSN. Bye!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/03/06
How completely heartbreaking. It was a great story, but now I need a hankerchief. |
Author Feedback: Lol, sorry, but it needed to be sad in the beginning! I almost cried while writing it. Thanks for the review!
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Good story, i love the song it really does fit perfectly, i cant wait for an update on this |
Author Feedback: I love the band, The Offspring, and while I was listening to my cd months ago, this idea kinda popped into my head, lol. Thanks for the review, and I hope the update isn't going to take too long, but I do have 3 other stories that really need updated as well, so I'm going to try and do something with those first. Plus, I've still got a few kinks that I need to work out with this story like...the rest of the plotline...  lol. Yeah, I'm a bit clueless on where this one is going, BUT I work best while winging it, so it should be interesting. Thanks for the review!
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Well, congratulations, you made me cry! Hehe, no doubt what yu were going for, am I right? I quite enjoyed this first chapter, especially the little flashbacks, an am looking forward to your update! Good job! |
Author Feedback: Lol, I almost cried while I was writing this. And in a way, yes, I was hoping to make the reader feel sad, or even cry while reading that chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed that last chapter, and I hope to have the next one out soon enough, though I've got a few other stories that need updating as well, and I want to get those done first because it's been such a long time. Thanks for the review!
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oh, i like it! i think you've done a great job of getting the story strted. that's my least favorite part, i always rush the beginning so i can get to writing the good stuff! |
Author Feedback: I know, the beginnings of stories can be a bit difficult to write and actually lay out a foundation so you don't rush it. In my other story, The Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry, it is terribly slow, and I just want to jump forward and write about the interesting stuff! Lol. Anyway, thank you for the review!
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ace929Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/03/06
Nice start to what looks like to be another great story. I NEED SOME POTTER V. GRANGER RIVALRY though!!!! please. it is one of my favorite stories on here and you are getting more scarce with the updates.
Anyway continue this story cause i looks great and please oh please update the other one? |
Author Feedback: Thanks, and yes, I know I need to update Potter Vs Granger Rivalry, I'm just a bit stuck on it. I didn't exactly leave it off at a place that would be easy to just pick the storyline back up, lol. BUT I will try to have an update out soon. Thanks for the review!
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i really like this story but its really sad. i hope you update the next chapter soon. i have a feeling that this will turn out to be a very interesting story.
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Author Feedback: I almost cried while I was writing it, I hate when a character dies (unless it's Ginny or Molly, then I'm cool with it, lol). I hope your feeling is right and that this will turn into an interesting story, lol. Thanks for the review, and I'll try to have the next chapter out soon enough, though I've got a few other stories that need updating as well, so it might not be too soon...
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That was one of the best I have read so far. I hope the next chapter will be posted very soon. |
Author Feedback: Lol, thanks, I'm glad you seem to like this one. I hope to have the next chapter out soon, but I've got 2 other fics of my own, and another one I'm doing with a friend, so it could be awhile. Lol, dunno what I was thinking, starting up another story, but I couldn't help myself! Thanks for the review!
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