Awwwwwwwww *wipes away tears* That was SO sweet! Not to mention funny. HAHA poor Crookshanks, he got underwear on his head LOL I love the bed he choose, always did want one of those. hhehe Great job! |
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Oh that was lovely! A wonderful mix of sweet and funny, all very endearing. A great story to begin my day. Thank you! I hope you keep up the great job. |
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That is so cute. Short but sweet. She really left him "hanging" there didn't she. That is so Hermione. |
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Great one-shot! The romace and the humor were woven in together so well. It seems that Hermione brings out the best in Harry. Also, your descriptive words of things through out the story are very good. There's no repetition of the same word(s). Well done and I hope to read more from you soon! Kudos!
p.s. I loved reading your story titled 'What Snape Saw'. That was just outrageously funny! |
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That was a great post,i just loved it,it was really good and i loved the way that you wrote this,i really hope to read more of your ffcs and keep writing  It was really sweet the way that he feels home when he is with her and how much a simple bed means to him  Great work |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/03/06
Oh that was sweet. I really really liked the part where she left him hanging so that they could go get the new bed. *G*
Lisa |
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EuroSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/03/06
Awww, really cute. I really love the concept, Harry's home is where Hermione is. |
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That was wonderful, the idea of them buying stuff for themselves. I loved how Hermione figured out the need that he had for something that was purely theirs and took care of it in typical Hermione fashion.
I liked the deep relationship between the two, their understanding and appreciation of each other. |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/03/06
Very nice and sweet! I'd love to hear the backstory, too. I love stories where Harry goes roaming, only to realize he's left the important things (namely Hermione) behind. That's sort of what I gathered had happened, anyway. I'd also love to have a future fic, too, about their family, and all the kids they make in that bed, etc.  |
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Awww! That was sweet! I like how Hermione thought about how Harry never had anything of his own. I was like "ohhh thats so sweet!". Also, kinda off topic, but Word Play was really good too. Lol, I hope you write more sugary good ness like this! |
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