That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

aaaahhh. i'm so interested to see where your going with this. i really is a bit confusing. did he or didn't he catch up to them and ahhhh!! write more!! can't wait!!

"Would he ever?"
THat is the same question in my mind. Will he ever notice?

This is shaping up to be a good story. Keep it up!

That was wonderful. I hope that harry sees how much she loves him before its too late!

“Mione...” he muttered, “what happened?” and he was choked by a tight embrace.

“I thought something had happened to you, your head bumped hard against the bins, and you weren’t waking up...” A verborrea overwhelmed his still bewilderd head.

“Mione... please stop.” He tried to sit up and got a bit dizzy, but Hermione caught him before he fell back down. “Calm down,” he whispered and took a hand to his head, where a bump had already grown big.

She took a deep breath and kissed his forehead. “I am so sorry, I didn’t mean to attack you,” she finally got out.


HEY!!! this section was in the text twice. just wanted to let you know and all i have to say is - poor hermione. and how the heck is this only gonna be a 3 shot?! i don't know how but alright. i wish it were longer. and i wish that hermione had just left really. why bother torturing herself when he'll never know.

oh i'm such a pessimist! lol. i love hhr so don't worry i'm rootin for them duh!
melissa
acoustics1220

That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

that was great! And thanks for uploading the chapter agian. I can't spell, deal with it. Update soon!---Tiger111991

chapter 2 is not showing, please re-upload it, eagerly awaiting next chapter.awesome fic so far.

could you please reload the second chapter, it seems to be missing. thanks!

could you pleas reupload this chapter? Chap. 2? It was just getting good at the end of chapter1 and know we can't read the second one...---Tiger111991

Rosali hey the chapter didn't upload - try again! PK says its either corrupted or just a blank chapter upload. thanks!
melissa
acoustics1220

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

i can't see your chapter.
This is the message i see on the page''This chapter has corrupted or a blank chapter was uploaded. Please contact the author and request that they re-upload the chapter''
I really like this story, can't wait for the next chapter

um, ok - i wrote a review a LONG time ago....I thought this would be Brilliant to finish but....well - i guess 5 reviews just isn't cutting it huh? man, please....please finish it? please?

its supposed to be only 2 chapters....so don't kill me anymore!
i want to see where else this goes, if its longer - well - yay! if its not...well ok...but finish it! please?
melissa
acoustics1220