okay, ur a great author--and i'm picky about what i read, so just kno that i really mean that. but there's just one thing in ur fics that i think u need to work on, and thats the accents u portray in the dialogue, most notably the french accent and hagrid's accent. i realize that this is a minor detail, and i dont mean to offend, but i find it distracting, there's too many Zs! fleur and gabrielle's speech doesnt flow very well because of it, and to improve on this would, in my humble opinon, make a series of great stories even better
PS: i think the only reason i really noticed this was because i tend to "hear" the way a character speaks as i read, and because i'm very, shall we say, "detail oriented" (otherwise known as anal retentive/obsessive... )

OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH That is not right, pelas ekep writing onthis sotry, you jsut leave us there. plase keep writing i like the start out of it. you didnt finish pelase finsih it!!!!!!!!1

I really really like it, im such a hermione harry fan, and i will finish this one, and read your others. REALLY GOOD WRITIER PLZ KEEP WRITING!

This story is another great piece of work! I believe the insinuation of their nighttime machinations, was more then enough to satisfy our wants,

Robertk

That totally needs another chapter.

Really great stuff. I don't really like Ginny all that much anyway. LOL.

Can't wait to read Circle's End.

I really loved that... it was brilliantly written... the way everything was described was amazing... and when Hermione described Harry's dreams to Ginny, I could almost feel my own heart tearing into pieces... poor Harry!
You're a brilliant writer! I loved this story so much!
-Michelle

AHHHH NOOOOOOO

it cannot be done!!!!!!

nooooooooooo

you have to make Ginny suffer a bit more!!!!!

is she your least favourite character too...or is that just me?

just a question...

and a raise of hands of who thinks that two certain people, one of whom just happens to be the only unattached person of the trio *overlooking "lav lav"* and a certain blonde dreamy blue eyed ravenclaw, are definitely perfect for eachother

Is that the end? Kind of sudden... so many things left unfinished.

Great description of Tonks' behavior, totally in character. This fic is on my Alert list, and I look forward to any additions. thanks

I always enjoy fics in which Harry ends up owning either Private Drive or Grunnings (or both!!!!).

Good start with the first chapter, planning on adding this fic to my update list. Later.

im after re-reading this... there is one question i have... what happened witht he morgage to the Dursleys house? what did harry do about?

God... ginny can be annoying cant she

Keep up the good work

Luke

im after re-reading this... there is one question i have... what happened witht he morgage to the Dursleys house? what did harry do about?

God... ginny can be annoying cant she

Keep up the good work

Luke

i dont know if i have reviewed this story... so i guess ill just say it now that i think this was writen perfectally as always!

keep up the good work and update your other storys asap!

Luke

Is the story done?I' confused...well it's an awsome story good job.

You. Are. Evil. Ya can't just end it there and then not even do a sequel. That's just cruel.

I don't think you have to worry about any Ginny-lovers. After all, if they were indeed Ginny-lovers, they wouldn't come to this site and read your stories anyway.