hey, I liked this story, even if there was a bit of the Ginny/bitch thing going on. I mean hey, she's not a bad girl... but Harry and Hermione... it was just made to be.

Hmmmmmmmmmm. Needs another chapter. It's really good writing all around, but you've left us on a cliff and you just _know_ that's not fair! Please...one more?


Regards,

the_scribbler

You should turn this into an actual multi-chapter fic! It's such a great start for one as well as such a waste to leave it hanging off like a cliffy!!

A lovely second chapter. I liked the interaction between Tonks and Hermione. I really liked Harry's support of Hermione at the end. That is squashing GinnySue, alright. I know you said this is a last chapter, but I would love to read Molly's reaction (in this universe) to the fact that there won't be OBHWF. Good job.

This was great and I really enjoyed it. I liked how Harry and Hermione came together in this story, how their respective slower and separate realizations crystallized into action thanks to Dudley.

I just love this story. It's amazing how all these emotions just leap through. It would be great to see them all at the wedding: Mrs. Weasley's reaction, Ginny's bitterness showing, etc. I sure hope you'd consider writing a sequel to this one.

that was very sweet. i wish it was longer though. o-well. now im going to go read your other stories!

that bitch ginny is evil though I doubt real ginny would do that.

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okay, ur a great author--and i'm picky about what i read, so just kno that i really mean that. but there's just one thing in ur fics that i think u need to work on, and thats the accents u portray in the dialogue, most notably the french accent and hagrid's accent. i realize that this is a minor detail, and i dont mean to offend, but i find it distracting, there's too many Zs! fleur and gabrielle's speech doesnt flow very well because of it, and to improve on this would, in my humble opinon, make a series of great stories even better
PS: i think the only reason i really noticed this was because i tend to "hear" the way a character speaks as i read, and because i'm very, shall we say, "detail oriented" (otherwise known as anal retentive/obsessive... )

OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH That is not right, pelas ekep writing onthis sotry, you jsut leave us there. plase keep writing i like the start out of it. you didnt finish pelase finsih it!!!!!!!!1

I really really like it, im such a hermione harry fan, and i will finish this one, and read your others. REALLY GOOD WRITIER PLZ KEEP WRITING!

This story is another great piece of work! I believe the insinuation of their nighttime machinations, was more then enough to satisfy our wants,

Robertk

That totally needs another chapter.

Really great stuff. I don't really like Ginny all that much anyway. LOL.

Can't wait to read Circle's End.

I really loved that... it was brilliantly written... the way everything was described was amazing... and when Hermione described Harry's dreams to Ginny, I could almost feel my own heart tearing into pieces... poor Harry!
You're a brilliant writer! I loved this story so much!
-Michelle