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Xaviel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/06
Whats the deal? The story ends up in the same place in the end that it was in the beginning, with Hermione's priorities in her friendship. You should make a sequel, a second chapter, an alternate ending do something.
 

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Rosali
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/06
Didn't really like it. Kind of confusing. But there were few mistakes adn the song was perfectly chosen.

Cheers!

Rosali
 

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karenkate_kitty
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/06
interesting... somewhat tragic because there's this issue with Ron not wantin them to be together... but at least the conviction was so Hermione, toodles.!!!1
 

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usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/06
That was nicely written. I really liked the way you integrated the lyrics into the fic and how it sorta went along with the story. Most song fics do that, but not very well...this one was well done. Great job.
Author Feedback: thank you
I was kinda depressed while writing this and I ketp listening that song and vola-the fiction was borned lol
 

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Cedric_Diggory_06
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
its so good! this fic brought tears to my eyes, really powerful! Great job.
 

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acoustics1220
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
eww, scary dark ron. why does hermione have to cave in like that to save a friendship? to me thats so like her.....i hope you update soon
Author Feedback: well it wasn't only Hermione's decicion. It was Harry's also. and why I made it that way? it was beacaue in some interview Rowling has said that Harry won't do anything to harm his friendship with Ron. and since Ron was against the two of them being together as item-they had to broke up.
Hermione knew that Harry would broke up with her beacause he don't want to lose Ron's friendship.. so instead of being dumpted, she made the fatal step.
Since both of them still love one another, then they kinda avoided one another. Harry was mad at her for dumping but also knew that she did it for him. that's just grazy, but what can I say-love is grazy
 

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Wicked Elphaba
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
This was really beautiful ~ excellent job. Are you sure you want this to just be a one-shot??? It'd make one heck of a story!
Author Feedback: I'll think about it. Perhaps I will update and make another chapter where they perhaps get together.
 

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goofball
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
This story has an incredible ending for a sequel, seeing as you have this marked as completed. If it wasn't I'd have waiting for the next chapter.
 

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sandtreader
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
Very nice!

Now if you can find a song for a sequel that brings them together again...

Good job.
 

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