ouch .... I didn't see it coming ... bloody painful that .... arghhh ... i need to wash my brain with some fluff now. Thanks

you like tragedies don't you? who doesn't even if it's my fave ship in this I still think you did well on this story....and I read your other story too... it was great... somehow I like this one better... it was tragic but at some point they did get together... I mean with a love this strong I guess only death can keep them apart...

awesome... ahehehe makes me wonder.... it's like how soulmates are written in most literature, they know they love each other, they know they're destined to be together, they deny themselves of true happiness then eventually realizes that they could not live without each other. in the end they finally decided to be together, they find true happiness and bliss and just when we thought everything is alright one if not both of them will die then the journey to find the other will happen again until finally they reach the point when all possible torture or torment have been gone through then finally they will live in a time and place when finally they can be together and actually tell the tale.

I really didn't expect everything to end like this. I really wish you could have done some other ending to the story. It was just too terribly sad.I really did love "Beautiful Disaster", but then I thought everything would end good. You're a great writer though, so I suggest you bring us more stories soon. Keep it going!

that was so horrible. i'm sorry. you are a very good author and i loved the beginning but i hated the end it was way too upseting. but you are a very good wtiter. good job. keep writing.

WHY?!?! Dammit! more than half these stories ends in one of their deaths!! STOP IT!!.... I hate those, theyre fine every once in awhile, but a little warning would be so wonderful. Overall, the story was fine, written well and all, but I just cant stand so much angst and death and... losing the ones we love... I didnt need to read that. Sorry, it was great and all but, not for me, specially not now.

That was so sad! I am just in a state of shock. I can't believe it. Great writing but wow this story is tragic.