Oh, you're evil! First, you write a story where Harry loses the girl to his best mate, then you write an evil story where she loses her life, just after they get together? What's wrong with you? How could you do this to us? I'm very upset now. I'm gonna have to read something so fluffy and sweet that it makes my teeth rot because of you...

oh my poor poor harry oh sweetie i'd take your pain away you poor baby and you babyhalo is one evil person for taking hermione away from harry

So I waited for about a year for the sequeal to A Beautiful Disaster and you give me this...

My heart broke over A Beautiful Disaster. You broke the HHr rule with that one. And this time around, with this story, you kill off Hermione. Right, you have got to stop doing bad things to HHr or I'll think you're in the wrong ship. I'm scared to read your other fics now.

Sorry, this is not a flame. I think you write with beautiful words. I just do not like your story line. I want HHr to live happily ever after. After all, in real life, how many of us really do live happily ever after? HHr is my escape from real life. So I want happy endings.

i just think - those poor kids.

i've reviewed already here but i'm a member now and i wanted to mark this as a fav fic in my control panel so - yeah. i hope you write something else up soon. i could probably deal with some angst/drama. you're a good writer too so i know it would be good reading.

anyway - please write more!
melissa
acoustics1220

Well I love the story, although I still question the integrity of the prequel in the first place, but that ending just seemed completely and utterly spontaneous and just served to prove my point about what was wrong with the first story. I'm guessing that was probably your point too but I think something along the lines of a time turner would have proved it rather than just spontaneously killing off Hermione at the end.

i can't believe you!!! why????!!!! why Hermione?!!!! OUCH!!!! did Harry die? did Ron know about their 'relationship'? tell me!!!!

i sent you a review before that was anonymous i have just read your story again and will repeat myself. this is so sad. i absolutely hate it. not to say you're a bad author i have read your other stories and they are all good except this one. i'm sorry but it's really sad and i don't like how it ends. once again sorry and no offence.

i sent you a review before that was anonymous i have just read your story again and will repeat myself. this is so sad. i absolutely hate it. not to say you're a bad author i have read your other stories and they are all good except this one. i'm sorry but it's really sad and i don't like how it ends. once again sorry and no offence.

Man...........That was definitally not like I thought it would end, but I guess that everything I want cant Happen.
I must say that I dont like all that many stories where, Hermione becomes deceased, and Harry has to lead a life of heartache and sufference

The story was overall well written, and I can tell that you put much effort into the writing. Hopefully you will write more stories that dont have Hermione dying in them?!
Did enjoy the first story!

wow, that was very sad at the end. but, well written, i liked both parts and look forward to reading more. great job!

Oh. My. God. I totally was not expecting her to die. It made me really sad! But, despite all that, I liked it! Yeah, the fluff ones are always good, but it's good to read/write some sad ones every once in a while, because life isn't always fluff and romance and happily ever after is it? Anyways, keep up the good work!!!

husker_fan_2006

omg, that was truely a beautiful disaster...i think the title from ur other story fits this one better, lol...but omggg, wow...this made me cry...fantastic job, vary sad, but FANTASTIC!!

this really upsets me!!! i'm still mad about hbp, you know...! i just hate it when one dies and the other lives.. then dies or goes crazy... i wish you would've warned us first...

anyway, this story was still nice.... love never dies.... keep up the good work...

First of all, you should have put a character death warning in your summary, then I could have avoided this upsetting story.
It is well written, but I hate when either one of them dies.
I'm off to find some fluff.

well, it really seemed like things would work out and good job on pulling jared through at the end....i was wondering why he was described in such detail early on. i usually never like to read these through once i get close to what the conclusion is.....especially when my only ship doesn't pull through....you used a great twisting plot and it was nicely written and for that - good job, but i won't be able to read this again. i take my ship too seriously with the line - dreams do come true (in my perfect h/hr world) good job. poor hermione. poor harry. no more tears to shed. btw - you spelled jared at least 2 different ways, minor beta detail but alittle off putting nonetheless
write on
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com