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aw, that was cute! I always love your little L/J ficlets! muah! brilliant! |
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Awwww....corny yet sweet. Oh, James has a poetic soul...*dreamy sigh*...so yummy... Lily is too lucky  I like it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/07
What!!! The end!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!! I. Love. This. Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O i sure do!!!!!!!!! love love love!!!!!!!!!!!!
I lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee iiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! Great writer! on to read more of your completely awesome stories!!!!!!!!!!! |
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You know, I think you've become one of my favorite authors! So thanks for the awesome stories, and keep it up. (I really liked the whole secret note thing, especially when lily had the audacity to give it to james while he was talking to McGonagal) lol
Cheers, Moon |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/06
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. ur story waz too cute. but it waz perfect. u shud rite more stories like this for the l/j ship. |
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Awwwww! ok i don't care if that was pure fluff it was SOOOOOOO sweet and.......keepp writing! (corny i know but hey  )
Midnight Maiden |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/06
*squeals* aww, that was soooooooooo squealable!!
haha, I LOVE those little love notes!! |
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VampireSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/06
Eeeek. That was me. Sorry.
Oh, and I meant 'late' not 'later'. My bad. |
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VampireUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/06
I have to say it: I love you. Really, I do. Your fics are fantastic, and anyone who doesn't see that is crazy.
This may be a bit later, but I found a few issues with this one, though:
"The professor opened her mouth to ask another eager question when the bell rand her query was drowned out by the students' chattering."
I'm guessing you meant '...the bell rang, and her...', that or something to that effect. If not, I don't know what rand means. :]
Next, in the second part of the story you wrote, "...even though they weren't even in the same room at the moment." Then, after the letter, it says, "She smiled at the back of his head as he poured some newt brain into his bubbling potion." How can Lily look at the back of his head if they're in different rooms? Or did I miss something?
I loved the roses, by the way, and the whole Circe thing.
Sorry if I was a bit off on those two things. They just didn't make sense to me. Beautiful story, though. |
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Nezy4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/04/06
Hi again. I forgot to add this to my fave's so here I am again.  But still, awesome oneshot!! |
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Nezy4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/04/06
Aww that was sooooo sweet!! Haha, I can totally imagine them writing notes like that, and passing them like that. Great job.... and Happy Valentine's Day in April!! Lol, |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/03/06
this story is so sweet! i love james' attempts. keep it up! |
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hp-n-hgSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/06
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/03/06
Alexander Graham Bell was in actual fact scotish, he was just in america |
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lolol *is in love*
Very cute, Mademoiselle Natali/Senorita Natali...
There's a girl on a website I go on called Natalie, who calls herself Natzie...just makes the Natzi slightly less worse...
Aah, cute.
And Rebecca, and Catherine are made up, silly...not just Elisa...
ly,
x Cazzy x
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