Heartbreaking. My heart physically hurt reading this. The fact that they were so close but they didn't... *moans in frustration*. I really wonder how I can expel so much into these fictional characters  But it's good writers like you that can invoke such strong emotions for them, reminding us of their love for them even when Canon has supposedly disappointed us. So even with the depressing ending, it was beautiful. I love depressing endings from time to time. |
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Wow. That was really amazing...You wrote it with such emotion, and it was such a unique perspective. I absolutely loved it! |
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C'est triste! “…she'll never be able to find a suitable ending because the rest of the story with Mr. Potter.” should be 'rest of the story is with' ..Sharp, and a welcome sight after reading fluff. I'm very sorry to hear about your magnitization, and I hope things work out for the better. Much love! |
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That was beautiful. Absolutely, without a doubt, beautiful. Spectacurlarly written... I was close to tears by the end. It was just...amazing. You're an amazing writer, and I adore your other fics as well. Great job! |
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JayRSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
That was beautiful. I'm sorry about the events that led you to a dark place. I've never found solace in writing, however I'm very glad you can.
I hope things are better for you. *Hugs*
Jay |
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BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
That story was very sad. Yeah, Hermione going crazy at the end was not the happiest time, but it was really well written. Good Job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
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That made me cry. That is a HUGE compliment, as i almost never cry.so SO awesome that I'm adding this 2 favorite stories and adding you to favorite authors. you captured my heart, sad ending or not |
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G'morning, MH!
I finally checked my email and saw that you had finished. I gotta tell ya, I LOVED the ending! It was ended just right, and I love the title.
Lex was right, it's such a sad story in the sense that there's simply nothing one can do to change fate. *sigh*
You did great on this one, MH. I'm glad it was an outlet for you to shake all those sad stories and happenings of the late...it turned out beautifully written.
Major Buggles, MH!
Love ya!
-L.O. |
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In complete honesty, I hate when Hermione is left behind, but I find it appropriate here that she was nearly driven mad because of that action. After all, her place was always by his side and he did a much greater injustice to her by leaving her in such a fashion and not allowing her to be where she needs to be. |
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...amazing. I'm simply amazed at the raw emotion I felt when I read this. It brought tears to my eyes and tore at my soul. This was a marvelous story and I hope you can write others like this one because they help me evaluate life for me and remind me that there's one more thing for me to do... |
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RosaliSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
That was very heart-wrenching, very heartbreking. It's funny, just yesterday I finished "A Wrinkle in Time", and it was also quite sad... guess the wave is taking us all, huh?
Everything passes, darling Terri, everything. And until then, as you said, all we got to do is write... and cling ot the ones we love and that love us.
In any case, a fellow writer is here, too, for anything you need. Just drop a line at ciliotta@yahoo.com
Rosali |
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
Wow....dark and deep. That was really good. I really liked that a lot. Hermione....wow.
-- Sage |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
Ah, Terri!!! You and Death finally reached an accord on this one, huh? I like what you did with the beginning and the end - you do a really good job with angst as always.
Remember - always here if you need us!
Love Bugs!
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Lajo1013Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
TERRI!!! OMG! that was fabulous!!!!! So moving and real and just... certain. I loved it!!
Hope things are going ok for you and yours. I am hoping to have more time now that my arm is back to functioning again. Its hard to be on the computer with only one operational arm. Anyhow, keep writing and now that I am always here reading!
XOXOXOX
Laura |
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