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Lol, you're right, this was sort of a depressing story, but it was good all the same. You're a fantastic writer, you do a wonderful job of painting the picture of what's going on in a reader's mind, kudos! Keep up the good work!
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/06
well, that is truly an angsty fic.. so angsty...yup, but i liked it... i loved the way you right.. so, good job!!!\
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/06
I don't usually like sad stories, but this one had something that made me like it-a lot in fact. This is the best short sad story I have ever read and I am not exaggerating |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/08/06
Wow, that was so tragic and just plain heartbreaking!!!  It's so sad , if she only had one more minute. But it's so unlike her to give up so easily. I thought she would would have scrouged the earth to find him. But then again maybe by then it was too late. |
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so sad. well, hermione apparently knew what she was talking about when harry asked her what she would do after his death.....she knew exactly what would happen. she'd be the richest witch in an asylum. and its so sad because both love each other and hermione is so choked up and harry doesn't tell her that he has to go. they're both caught up in each other and its so sad because just seconds later she is able to get herself together but he had to go. his battle was happening right then, and she never got to do what she needed to do. so sad. i liked it though. poor hermione. so in your mind did she die a natural death or did she commit suicide? well it seems at the end she understands what her mind was trying to cope with. it seems she has grasped her sanity back. but at a price obviously. good fic though! very good. great writing. good job!
melissa
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tfr_hqSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/06
tht was soooooo sad.. you had me heartbroken there too.
i do....I do, Harry,” I will continue to breathe. “Just give me one more minute while I make my way to you….”
that really made me cry
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ReniourSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/06
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TanyaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/06
awww...that was so good..i think i'm gonna cry! i loved ! |
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I know, I know, I know! You warned us, and me knowing your writing-skills, I also knew I shouldn't read this story when I was sick. So this morning I woke up and thought - hey, it's a good day, I'm feeling fine, why not reading Terri's story now?
And so I did - and believe me: I don't regret it!
It's just ... it's so sad!! Words left unspoken .. God that hurts so much! Reading their story hurts so much! But it was still great!
I just wish Harry would have known, that she loved him, too - but that's what the story was about. He didn't know, and that's why Hermione suffered so much in the end!
Once again you managed to make your readers feel with the characters, and it was brilliant! Really! Very, very emotional, but still fantastic!
I hope you're feeling better now, and I'm sorry I wasn't there for you.  But gladly there were other people - many thanks to Sara and Lexi!
Love you,
~Ilka |
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What a cutting story! The regrets of things unsaid and undone are always most painful. This story was brilliantly written, and I hope it has helped lessen your pain. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/06
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AidaylaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/06
That was very well written. And incredibly sad...But I liked it,regardless. I can really identify with Hermione. Sometimes things left unsaid will haunt us for the rest of our lives. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/06
Even though this was incredibly heart-wrenching it was also beautifully written. I really love the way your mind works. It really felt so real. I mean the despair felt tangible. Wonderfully done  ! |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/06
Bloody hell, Terri...wow. I would never (categorically!) have ever read a story like this, but this was an exception because YOU wrote it. And despite the darkness, it was still brilliantly written - and so riddled with emotion - I think I'm actually at a loss for words! But your sad story struck a chord deep within - and I hope it did help you, writing this. I hope it's lessened your pain. Take care,
Janie xoxoxo |
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You warned us...you said it plain and simple, this is a dark story, but noooooooo...I had to ignore that warning and read it anyway...WHILE AT WORK. I'm a dork
That was simply brilliant!
My Terri, all I can say is *hugs*
xoxoxo Sean |
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