I found this chapter very intriguing. i really enjoy ed all the emotions you placed within the characters, what i find most interesting is that you isolated Hermione to be the hero in this chapter. Well done.

aw I really like this! I hope you're going to update again and soon! I'm worried about Hermione~

i think the story was ok. weird but ok. but continue writing them.

thats a highly unlikeley story. mcgonigal wouldnt have to 2 head people share the same dorm. especialy if theyre the opposite gender!

what?! isn't this site supposed to be supporting Harry and Hermione?! what the heck happened!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why did that have to happen?

i didn't really like that. it just sort of left me hanging! and its really annoying, u could have a much better conclusion!

This is a great story. I read in your bio you need a new beta reader. If so, let me know, I'd be glad to help.

Although i have no ideas on how to destory the next horcrux.....i did understand what happened with lily/voldermort thing...its was very errie and i loved it...please don't make hermione blind for too long...i loved the scene of harry and hermione's first kiss...very hot and desperate :} :} and then, Ron, of all people decides to blab half of their secrets in the hallway!!arghh what cha gonna do??

rachel

That was a great way to destory the locket. I think the next horocrux that should be destory is the cup. Idk if maybe u could use Ron for that one and idk use a potion that will make the drinker feel all alone and nothing can save him from it. Then after they find the cure Ron will realize that there are wrost things in life then Hermione and Harry being together. Plus add a little Luna in there. I agreed with the drama u started with Hermione being temporaily blind. Anyways i hope u update soon, keep writing!!

wow!

well that was original. and you said hermione would be blind for....awhile? so she's not permanently blind then? that would have been interesting too. oh poor hermione. she's got injuries because of harry and then voldemort has to go and do more damage as well. geez. she really should just leave him.

poor girl.

anyway, hopefully that writers block of yours will go away quickly and good luck with that!
lol
melissa
acoustics1220

Great story, I hope you continue it soon. I hope Ron stops being angry in one of the next ones, the three of them just aren't the same without the redhead.

you can't leave her blind during the whole story they are going to need hermione i mean come on without her that weird lily incarnate lady would have killed them omg i hope it comes back maybe she'll just have to wear glasses so then she can get contacts or something omg but good job very original didn't think of lily there very good

good. good. good. Now for regular updates and maybe something I know heeps of people would like. The rating upped to at the least, R? or if you want, NC-17? Harmony is served well with that rating cause it gives you freedom.

It's good that the locket has been taken care of.
As much as I feel bad for Hermione I feel worse for Harry since he is going to be feeling guilty for her getting hurt trying to help him.I can't wait for the next one.

Ah wow now this is getting interesting indeed. should be quite an adventure to see what happens next.