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wow, that\'s really amazing how they keep logically deducing what each horcrux must be! i wonder if harry will eventually recognize hermoine\'s actions and if they will help him in the end, and i really really want them to get back together again! |
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wow, this story is incredible! the plot is so intense it seems like a whole story could be written on what has happened so far, even without voldemort! i'm really excited to see how it all comes together... amazing! |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 21/08/07
great ending!!
at first i was confused when you said that harry steadily weakened, but then i remembered after he broke up with hermione. so he's alright? good.
very good story i must say, and i liked the idea of that letter. |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 21/08/07
oh, very nice ending to the final battle! now for the aftermath... |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 21/08/07
i would have thought that hermione would be more tenacious about her relationship with harry. but it's your story here, and so far i like it! |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 21/08/07
good action sequence! now that nagini is out of the way, we shall see what develops... |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 21/08/07
nice description of a young voldemort, and good development of the story overall. i look forward to reading more! |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/08/07
emotions were a big part of this chapter, although i think you could have squeezed a little more harry and hermione into it. good progression! |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 21/08/07
having already read the 7th book, i can appreciate your guesswork here, because not many clues were left with the 6th book.
great so far!
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 21/08/07
nice way out of the whole "how do we destroy the horcuxes?" dilemma.
what does the latin phrase mean in english? |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/08/07
nice explanation of the prophecy.
i wonder what will happen with ron? |
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I can't believe that you've finished. THis is a wonderful story and I've enjoyed it so much. I loved that you ended it on such a high note. That letter from Dumbledore was perfect. And thanks for not killing one of the twins. I still can't believe that JKR did that. Anyway. Bravo! This was the perfect ending. |
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andrea h.Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/08/07
nice story so far, and i look forward to reading the rest!
you have a nice writing style that does a good job of mimicking jkr's. you also depict the characters very well.
again, good job! |
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Hey SpecialK220,
Once again another great chapter. I must admit I was hoping you would expand with further detail the bond between H/Hr but I'm not the author :-)
Otherwise excellent chapter just like the rest and I love Albus' last 4 words to Harry.
Eagerly awaiting your next story |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 14/08/07
It was what i hoped for the actual ending. I really did like it. You should really write a sequal to it. |
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