Cute little story, and I could definitely see Ron going out like that.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

hmm, i loved the story, i really fo.. but i just don't like how you made Rone here.. coz, ron's supposed to be a part of the Golden Trio and will forever be.. he shouldn't have been the insufferable prat and he shouldn't be left behind or left dead... but i loved it nevertheless...

I support h/hr!!!
Go harmony!!!

That was one hell of a story. To be honest, the ending is what really got to me. I liked how you had first person POV with Hermione. Im not surprised at Rons life though. Anyways, that was great, I really enjoy your works.

An intersting one-shot ... it feels to me like you have the makings of a full-length story in there somewhere.

Oh, and the line “Oh for the love of Merlin's great, hairy, bloody bullocks!” is completely classic.

That was really good. Though I must admit there were some things that I didn't care for. Like the names of their kids or how many children they have/had. *shrug* Great little fic!

All in all a wonderfully beautiful, fascinating story. So well thought out and brilliantly written, from working out their feelings for each other, getting engaged and married, destroying Voldemort, and having such a wonderful long full life together, just made this story so much more special. An amazing piece of writing. Keep up the wonderful work.H/Hr forever.

An interesting twist to their story. One I don't usually see.

Excellent excellent story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I thoroughly enjoyed. I hope you'll continue to write stories along the lines of this one.
Thanks again,
Val

that was fun to read. somewhat AU to the book at some point but hey it's fan fiction. awesome work!

Well, that was very interesting. I really liked it. Well done.

this is good yet scary...
brilliant but disturbing...
yeah thats what im sticking with...

Honestly, It's really good and I could say it's one of the best I've read. The bad thing? Events happen to fast and the introduction of information happens abruptly.
These mistakes are only small ones but improving them may help you.
I also loved the characteristics of the characters. You kind of altered their characteristics. But it was a good change. . .

It's a really good story and I think it would really be nice if you made a kind of sequel or an event that happened inside this fic. It'll be great.

Once again, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!

wow. that was....amazing. seriously. it was awesome. sad about ron though. and dumbledore. but it was a great story.

OMG that almost made me cry! That was almost as sad as when JKR killed Dumbledore! And I wasn't kidding about the crying bit.

A beautiful and potent piece of work. The only confusing part was Ron dating Lavender Brown. That item aside, I have no complaints about this story.

The end was appropriate, both would have died for Hogwarts and now in their final years, they choose how they die rather than letting it just happen as it would. It's sort of simular to their decison to go after the Horocrux's rather than just waiting around for Voldimort.