elieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/06
omg iLOVE all these short flicks they are heaps good and i love a curse in rverse as well thats my fave!!!!!
keep writing i think ur da best...  |
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Nice bit of fluff to water down the angst and drama that seems to be flowing through portkey lately. lol Great little fic! |
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Another great oneshot! Terrific! I loved how stubborn Hermione was, it seemed so in character. The conversation was very realistic. Keep up the excelent writing! |
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Nice story. I really enjoyed it. Well written, good dialog. I could see things playing out like this. Well done. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/06
That was really cute. I really liked the idea that you put in that Harry needs to take it a day at a time and to live life to the fullest.  Great job. I liked the fact that it wasn't super fluffy. While they are good, non-fluffy fics are good also. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/06
cute story, i like. you should write more.
a technical note, in sentences like this - ""You may be able to bare the risk, but I wouldn't be able to bare... losing you." " - you use the word "bare", as in bare skin, when it should be "bear", as in to bear a burden.
other than that, though, it was really sweet! |
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So beautiful story. Love like you get display the whole essence between Harry and Hermione, their love and unconditional support for each other.
Beautiful, thanks a lot. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/06
I could see this scene happening. It's cliche, but it's also perfect H/Hr. Harry cannot resist Hermione, he never could. Her friendship has been steadfast and her love would be the same. Nice fic, thanks for writing! |
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TubaPlayaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/06
Cute. I've wanted to write something ever since...ya know..THE-BOOK-THAT-MUST-NOT-BE-NAMED, and this is close to want I wanted to wirte and even though it is not mine, I'm glad that Harry and Hermione came together after...ya know...Great story! |
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BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/06
Nice story, but I had a little trouble believing that Harry would just give up that easy. Still, the story was awesome. Great job! |
Author Feedback: Good point, but at the same time, I left it completely open. I started from a fragment of the arguement. This could have been an arguement that had been going on for weeks, days, months even!
So, Harry might not have taken such a short time to crack, if I had started the arguement then and there, but I gave the impression that this arguement was started quite awhile ago, so Harry could have only just made these realisations, after a long few weeks of dealing with these comments from Hermione.
*laughs* But yeah, good point, I thought of it too, when I was writing it, but that's when I came up with the fact I hadn't started the arguement there... I just started my story there...
Thanks for the review!
-Kourtz |
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aww, so cute fiction. Really, really good.
ohh.. Harry/Hermione.. why Rowling don't see how perfect they are *wipes a lingering tear*
and I did enjoyed reading it, and trust me, I know what you mean by exploding. lol. Same with me-lots of ideas running around my hear, driving me nuts  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/06
i like it let me read more i want to know what happens next |
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