AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/09
this is crap. even my boarding school sex story is better |
Author Feedback: ... OI.
First off, there's such thing as CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. YOU SHOULD TRY IT! There are plenty of ways to tell people you don't like their work, without telling them that it's 'crap'. You could try giving some reasons why you don't like it also, by the way... that might actually HELP.
Second, the story is G! There's NO sex in it, and there wasn't meant to be! You can't compare a story that's NOT meant to be sexual, to one that is. Of course there's going to be a level of disappointment.
THIRD, yes, I do realise that the story isn't the best.. I wrote it when I was 13, the level of writing isn't going to be excellent.
Fourth, people like you make me so mad. I can take criticism, but I can't take bashing, and that was just plain, outright BASHING. I was brave enough to post this story on the internet and let everyone read it. I've seen a lot worse than this, and I'm sorry, but I think you're being extremely unreasonable. Think it's crap all you want, I don't care... but if you're going to say it's crap, give me an actual VALID REASON.
Which brings me to the question....
Why waste your time posting something like that if you ACTUALLY thought it was crap? Why bother reading all of it... why reply? You're wasting YOUR time, AND MINE!
*Breathes* Okay, I'm done. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/08
Cute.  I've always beena Harry/Hermione fan, and you've captured the relationship between them perfectly. Keep it up!  |
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I enjoyed the depth of this one even though you did get me a little annoyed, but that was because yet another writer can't spell 'than', why it is so many of you put in 'then' instead of the correct word, THEN is a reference to a period of time, THAN is a reference to a choice an absolutely different context and it drives me crazy when the story suddenly makes no sense or should I say whan the story etc etc. |
Author Feedback: Uum, thanks for the review... but 'Whan' isn't really a word. It doesn't mean that, anyway. Checked it in the dictionary 
Not the point - you have to cut me a bit of slack. I wrote this when I was like.. 13. I'm 17 now, that was AGES ago. I don't use it in that context anymore. I know what then and than means now...
I do genuinely thank you for the review, though... it's good to know you enjoyed my story, despite the errors...
-Kourtz |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/08
omg...i saw the title and i was caught..i actually have read this before and i think have written a review as well..anyway...the story is really romantic in it's own little way...very touching...and i would really like to commend you especially with your title...it's really an eye catcher...i know mine was caught ...keep up the good work...great titles!  ) |
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That was amazingly cute. Very well written! Great job, keep up the good work! I loved it!!! |
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MargoUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/07/07
Hey ! I love this story !
I'm French so I didn't understand everything and I surely have made faults in this review but nevermind
Nice job ! Congratulations ! |
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LothirielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/07
I loved it, it was very nice and fluffy. Well, the internal battle of Harry was shown very nicely. I especially liked the fact that you kept Hermione in character. |
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AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/07
nice....was a real cute one..n neway i always love harry/hermione mushes!!!dont give up on ur ideas...u'll go a long way
keep it up buddy! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/06
i think the story has got a good flow so far |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/06
Great story, I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/06
hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/06/06
this story was very good so far andd i just can not wait fo the next part this story is really interesting |
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chereeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/05/06
you should wright more stories but longer. because they are good. |
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LianaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/06
Hey great story so far
i am soo happy that somebody else wants harry and hermione 2 be together cause everybody else i no want her and ron 2 b together
anyway keep up the great work |
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i absolutly LOVE it!!