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GO COLTS!!! haha...i just had to say that because I am a DEVOTED Colts fan...hehe...well...I loved this story...even if it was based loosely about the Steelers...hehe...it was really cute and I just LOVE the Draco/Ginny pairing!!!! My favorite!!! |
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I would have liked this a lot better if you HAD drug it out and let them talk a lot. The long paragraphs of narrative were off-putting. I ended up skimming most of it. If you ever decide to redo it and give it the word count the plot needs, I'm sure it will be a lovely piece. |
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Oh...
P.S. Congrats on the baby!!! Wahooo!!
Ehe... due to "celebrating" the Steeler's win, huh? Looooool.... well congrats... here's wishin you have a strong and healthy baby! How exciting!!!!
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Hi!!!!
CONGRATS STEELERS!!!!!!!!
THEY WON!!! WOOOT!!! lol...
Well.. on that note, i LOVED THIS STORY!!! to be honest... i actually read this while at work a few days ago, but couldnt review.. and i just remembered tonight while watchin the SUPER BOWL.
This was so fluffy, and sweet, and funny at points, and just plain adorable!!! great job!!!
Silver-Magick131 |
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aww. this was sweet. to me, i thought it was a little long but nevertheless sweet. i like how its an interpretation of your life. makes it more interesting. but yeah. anyway good job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/06
Congrats and great story! You know, it is always the best way to celebrate! My boyfriend and I have different teams though. Oh well, it still works! |
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I live forty-five minutes after from Pittsburgh, and I know what you mean.We're going Steelers crazy over here.My school is decorated head to toe in black & gold decorations.Congratulations on the baby.I can't wait for Sunday,even though I hate football.I've still watched the last two games even though I hate it.I hope the Steelers win.Good story.I liked it. |
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meeazSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/02/06
aw. this was really cute. and CONGRATULATIONS!!!
although i am a patriots fan, my wishes are that the steelers pull through!!! |
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HPfanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
cute...
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aleja21Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
I think you've managed turn me into a complete and utter sap with the ending of this story. It was so sweet I loved it, it was just what I needed today. |
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I love your story, you did a great job, thanks for a wonderful read,
congratulation on your baby, I have 2 LOL
huggs |
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