Bravo! My highest compliments go to you. You have truly engineered a brilliant masterpiece in this. Wow! I actually really enjoy the chapter length and the pacing of the story is absolutely fantastic. I like how it's picking up now and really can't wait to read more. Your characterizations are very persuasive and the plot is clearly very cleverly written. Again fantastic work. I can't wait to read more!

Jo Bob

oh my gosh...you can not leave us hanging like that. I loved the update and the plot seems to be getting deeper and better. Voldemort got what he wanted, Tandra close to Draco, I'm guessing to get get hairs. He got Harry out by himself, an easier target. We can only hope that Harry does not give up and quit. It wouldn't be like him, but this kind of a hurt he has never experienced.

I agree that there has to be another motive for Draco willing to teach them that spell. Is it is simple as getting in good with Tadra..Mark of the beast seems to allow Harry to tap in to some more darker powers, hence making him the dark phoenix. Why does it take both to make Phoenix tears though? Will we see an ability to transform into such creatures?

Another great chapter. I'm almost caught up. The wedding scene was touching. I hope that was a little bit of foreshadowing. Rather interesting new ability for Hermione. Seeing that you saved Cho's life I wonder what you have in store for her.

That was too funny about the joined hands. I loved the cure, that's one powerful kiss. Essentially like Phoenix tears. I fear Draco will do something very evil soon.

great update. We seem to have learned a little more about the mark of the beast. I wonder how much his powers will grow. I think that his love, especiall his sister and Hermione will keep him from becoming absorbed into the power. I hope at least.

You’re welcome! Though… I don’t know why you are thanking me. I’m not the one who put forth the effort of time and thought. Not to mention the gumption it takes to display to the world some of the ideas rolling around in your head. lol

You’ve give birth to a baby, so to speak. lol Well, the baby you have given birth to has… moved me; in different ways. It’s why readers read and writers write as you stated.

So, thank you for sharing your time, thoughts… the great painting you have allowed me to see… experience. It’s been one heck of a ride so far. Don’t blow it now! lol

Rick

P.S. If you really want to thank me then reward me with another chapter! *looks innocent* lol

Nice start. I really love the details with the new magic stuff. And the Grangers are cute.

Please don't have Tadra and Draco join together. That would just be too wrong. It seems the trio all have unique powers now. I still think Harry has one more to reveal.

Loved the update. The scene in the Astronomy Tower was well done. I want to see what the link really is between those two. Tadra being sorted into Slythen surprised me. I curious about Ginny and I have a feeling we have not heard the last of Cho.

Awesome chapter. Loved the Dudley incident! He deserved it. Sad about Figg. The ending was beautiful!

You saved yourselfthe last chapter with this great update. Glad to see the anullment showing true love and a great kiss win out. Please don't tell me the swimming incident is going to create more questions due to the oasis. Is Figg essentially a squib, or does she remember magic, just not being an auror. Loved Harrys heartfelt confession to Hermione's little sister. He needs to hurry up and tell the one who wants to hear it the most.

Oh my gosh...You leave us with this? They can't seem to get together, but you have him marrying someone else...As long as this gets resolved. Are the marks of the beast just scars or are they something else all together?

Wow, what a chapter. It does seem that there is something up with their tears. Ron being selfless was a shock. That doesn't happen too often.

Awesome update and I loved the ceremony. Will we get explanations as to all the sparks and the Phoenix always being involved when they kiss? You are dragging out them getting together forever. Do her tears (Hermine's have powers when her eyes are gray?