Finally! I have finally finished reading the whole thing once again. It really does take forever when one doesn't have as much time as one would hope.

Anyway, thank you, thank you for posting yet another great chapter to this most excellent of tales. It was a pleasure to read yet again. Furthermore, this new chapter continues in the great style of bring forth the unexpected.

The playful banter and innuendo between Harry and Hermione was most agreeably. The humor was brilliant as well; I loved the depiction of Fawkes as a chicken.

Dumbledore in jail was one heck of a twist! I can imagine him in a black and white striped prison robe and pointed hat. Moreover, just when I thought you couldn't possibly add any more potential niches for by-play, you go and insert yet another to the list. Brilliant!

There was one instance where I was utterly disappointed, however. You see, I was hoping you wouldn't allow Tadra to develop feelings for Draco. I liked Tadra. I thought she was smart. Now not so much. Apparently Harry shouldn't have trusted her after all.

Oh, I almost forgot. There was one aspect of this chapter where I felt it was a little too anticlimactic. It was the scene where Harry and Hermione apologized to one another. I guess I felt more could have been said.

Moving along, I hope to see your return before not too long.

Rick

Loving this story so far. Just picked it up a few days ago and read it straight through. Considering the interactions between Harry/Tadra/Draco, I wonder if he'll find a way to remove the mark.

You certainly do like to make use of Luna, don’t you? So, if Luna is to be believed (and why not? She has radish earrings), Harry and Hermione’s lives are linked—she did say that Harry was alive, and Hermione was proof of that. I wonder how deep the link goes. I’ve noticed that being physically separated causes Harry and Hermione pain, but I don’t know if that is a direct cause of the nature of the situation (the implied betrayal) or if it is the act of being separated. I’m leaning towards the first because Hermione didn’t seem affected when she went home for the summer, but there are factors I’m not sure of. I don’t suppose you would tell me, would you?

Oh, and when Filch came to let everyone know they would be going home, he said that could use the flu—which is influenza. I believe you meant the Floo. The bit with Petunia was interesting. So she was in an accident, but neither she nor her car were harmed in anyway? She doesn’t have latent magic, does she?

Your plot twist was lovely. I’m not sure the public would allow fudge back in office though, not after what happened before. It’s a little far-fetched. You might have been better with a different puppet instead. Still, the twist was nice, and well executed. Also, I would have liked to have seen a little more on Mathias Clay. His story line was…rushed? Is that the right word? It seemed like you could have taken the section about him and turned that into a chapter in itself. Consequently, what did he give Harry? I’m not sure if Harry forgot about it or if I forgot reading about it…

I have another theoretical question, and then I will let you go (I know I must be driving you crazy, with all of the questions I ask every time I review. If it makes you feel any better, I have about three pages of questions I‘d like to ask JKR about the books).

Tadra has been teaching Harry Dark spells, as you said. Does this affect Hermione? I mean, Dark objects, used for killing, set off her ‘death-allergy’. Dark wizards chasing after her set it off. The beasts from the Jaharu set it off. Does Harry practicing the Dark Arts affect Hermione in anyway? For example, if Harry practices for an hour or so, then visits Hermione after, would it make her antsy or something? Or would it not affect her at all because Harry would not harm her? I only ask because Hermione stated that she knew that that was the nature of Harry and Tadra’s lessons, and I didn’t know if it was because she felt something or just knows Harry that well.

Anyways, all questions aside, it was a great chapter. The twists and turns were great fun, and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to see you update soon!

Cheers,

Madm_05

Just read the first few chapters and I like the story so far

Thank You! Thank you! Thank you!
I've been waiting so long for the next chapter. Wow! I can't wait to see why Dumblebore was arrested and how long he'll let them think they have him under arrest. I know that perfection takes time but I hope its not so long til the next chapter. Thank you,agian!!!

Magorian

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Glad that you're back
Truly amazing chapter. I hope that you update soon. Can't wait to see how this story ends

Oh my, I certainly have been away for a long time, haven't I? I just decided to check and found three new chapters. All of them are wonderful by the way.

I like the way this is going! Never a dull moment, that's for sure. I really like this recent twist. So, there was clearly something in the chocolate that made everyone more agitated. And Cho...I'm guessing she was either under the Imperius, or she was permitted to live by swearing fealty to Voldemort. Time will tell!

I like the bit with the dragons, though I'm curious as to why the one didn't attack Hermione when it had the chance. It was very friendly, actually, so I'm not sure if the dragon itself was usual, or if Hermione's abilities have something to do with it (I'm more inclined to believe the latter, mind, because of Luna's comments about having Harry or Hermione show them to her).

Ah, so many layers, so little time. I would chat more about the many comlexities I love about your story, but I've already taken up enough of your time.

Cheers,

Madm_05

Great story. It is really one of my favorites. Update soon!

I just finished reading this story for the second time and - boy, oh boy - what a cliffhanger! There are so many untied avenues left in that last chapter for you to expound upon, it is somewhat difficult to believe you fit it all in. I am very excited to see this story continued.

I have a question. After Hermione remembered the attack; when she was in the hospital wing, Harry gave Hermione one last look. Why didn't Harry stay with her after she gave him a pleading look? One that Harry clearly recognized as her asking him to stay.

I loved all the scenes that encompassed Harry's stay in the hospital wing; the one where Hermione snuck in under Harry's cloak. Madam Pomfrey's actions and especially Hermione falling out of bed, that was hilarious.

How and when did Tadra's father drug the golden trio? I do not recall this.

I have just read this whole story for the second time since this last chapter was posted. Man, I can not wait for the next chapter. This deception at the end caught me so off guard. I really can not wait for the next chapter and hopefully all will be revealed. Although, I feel quite sure that Pansy Parkinson and Malfoy are in it together with Cho. And I'll bet Cho was polyjuiced. Anyway, thank you for this super fantastic story!!!

Bravo! My highest compliments go to you. You have truly engineered a brilliant masterpiece in this. Wow! I actually really enjoy the chapter length and the pacing of the story is absolutely fantastic. I like how it's picking up now and really can't wait to read more. Your characterizations are very persuasive and the plot is clearly very cleverly written. Again fantastic work. I can't wait to read more!

Jo Bob

oh my gosh...you can not leave us hanging like that. I loved the update and the plot seems to be getting deeper and better. Voldemort got what he wanted, Tandra close to Draco, I'm guessing to get get hairs. He got Harry out by himself, an easier target. We can only hope that Harry does not give up and quit. It wouldn't be like him, but this kind of a hurt he has never experienced.

I agree that there has to be another motive for Draco willing to teach them that spell. Is it is simple as getting in good with Tadra..Mark of the beast seems to allow Harry to tap in to some more darker powers, hence making him the dark phoenix. Why does it take both to make Phoenix tears though? Will we see an ability to transform into such creatures?

Another great chapter. I'm almost caught up. The wedding scene was touching. I hope that was a little bit of foreshadowing. Rather interesting new ability for Hermione. Seeing that you saved Cho's life I wonder what you have in store for her.