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That was really good! I want to kill Petunia... Anyway, send next chapter soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Yea, Petunia sucks! There are a few scenes coming up in chapters 5 and 6 about her  hehe |
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DawnUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/02/06
These chapters seem resonably long, and a definite improvement from your prolouge. It would have been interesting to see Sirius' chnging opinion of his parents instead of him, from such an early age thinking their "pureblood freaks". And would his parents have let him be associated with the Potters (Who are probably blood traitors, seeing as James has no problem with Lily being muggle-born). It was an unexpected twist that James had to help Lily to Diagon Alley, it sounds very interesting. I'm looking forward to their first encounter. |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm not going to write about any encounters with the Sirius's mum and dad at the moment, but since the Potters are a respected family in the wizarding world, it wouldn't look good if the Blacks wouldn't let their son associate with the Potter's son. Also, Sirius did promise not to tell his parents about Lily |
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Author Feedback: I updated today! YAY-A-YAY  Happy Birthday, George Washington!!!!!! This chapter is for you! So...ummm...riiiiight...I told you I was slowly becomng insane  |
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more! more! more! more! yay!!!! you updated! i like the whole lily-and-james-meeting-before-school-actually-starts-so-the-ball-will-get-rolling-faster-so-something-interesting-will-happen-sooner-so-i-will-be-happier-twist. (see, i told you i would compliment you when you made it pretty!) UM, yeah. if you hear anything funny, like in the flowerpot outside, it's probably just the um, neighbor's dog. yeah! that's right! (darn it! i'll have to find a new stalker secret club that has only one member as of yet!)  sorry your mom's strict.  |
Author Feedback:  HOW DARE YOU TRY AND TRICK ME INTO THINKING THAT YOU AREN'T TRYING TO STALK ME!!!!! YOU MUST BE PUNISHED!!!!
lol, I'm going a bit mad without my internet. I'm dog sitting right now, so there are two dogs in my house, and they can be very evil to people that they don't know, so you had better be careful......muahahaha ha! ummm, yea, I updated again, so you don't have to stalk me anymore |
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MexiChickSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/02/06
Cute. I dont know how else to describe this chapter but cute. IT's an intersintg veiw on how Lily got around the whole muggle-born thing. It's cute. Good work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Sorry that I didn't reply sooner, but I ouldn'tget on the internet  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
oh. sorry. that was mischief managed just now. i accidentally signed out. hehe. woops. |
Author Feedback: I'm going to update in like 5 minutes! yay! mwahaha! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
ooohhh..... that really sucks. sorry. i had NO idea. well its not like i couldve. No, of course not! i'm no stalker! hahahahah!! no, really! i swear! (Drat! she found me out!)   your mom's strict. |
Author Feedback: Are you sure you aren't stalking me? lol. yea my mom is pretty strict |
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DawnUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
that prolouge was a tad too short. More descriptions would help liven the work. Overall the story does seem intriguing. Hope the chapters aren't this short though. |
Author Feedback: The next chapters are longer, but they are still short. Chapter 5 is longer, and I haven't written past chapter 5 yet, but they will probably be longer as well. |
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MexiChickSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
A really, really short chappie, but it seems like an interesting idea. BUt then again, prolouges are supposed to be short. I'm just an impateint kind of person. Update soon. |
Author Feedback: I have the first five chapters typed up, and the first 4 are kind of short, but the 5th one is longer I'm not really supposed to be on the internet right now, but I'll try to post chapter two tonight or tomorrow, and after that, I don't know how long it will be until the next update. It all depends on whether or not my mom is at home. |
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JEEZ!! that was so short its almost depressing. almost, but not quite. i cant really give you a compliment, seeing as how i know absolutely NOTHING (hint, hint, wink, wink)but if it shows promise, trust me when i say I WILL!!!! |
Author Feedback: I'll try to update either tomorrow or tonigh, since I'm not supposed to be on the internet, or the computer at all, for that matter, so I can only update when my mom isn't home. |
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