I really liked this story! It was hot and it stayed in character. It was good.

WOW that was good!, REALLY Good!! go feminin-power! jaja Hermione has some tricks huh?? I bet Harry does too, that would be also good!
Malu D.

Haha, Harry was wanking while thinking about Hermione... and she caught him! It was too bad that Hermione was on that time-of-the-month... you could've made this fic more smuttier with her and Harry togther Great story! Very sexy!

Hahaha, I loved it. How old are they, anyway? Like, thirty or something? Just wondering, though you probably won't even answer.

Hehe, thanks for writing this!

SwishAndFlick31

Nothing better than Adult Harry and Hermione ,,,I could read your stories all day. You really do need to finish the others. I LOVE What Snape Saw. How jealous can you make him!!!

This was an excellent fic. It was totally creative. Very hot indeed!!!

LOL that was brilliant! I loved it! I couldn't stop giggling throughout the whole thing! lol! very well written!
-Michelle

I really enjoyed this story and your other story, what snape saw, as well. Great job! I am going to go and read your other stories now.

Michelle

A good story, with situation thats not too hard to imagine. Wish harry hermione end up together

I just read all three of ur stories. Man, ur a hot writer. I mean-ur writing is hot; im not sure if ur a hot writer, but; ok, ill just shut up now.

please disregard the previous wannabeawizard review. the er reviewer was not sane at the time.

(humankind/mankind same thing what was i thinking!?!?!?!)

oh yeah i 4got to say your story was very hot and i like it how hermione saw harry's teenage bathroom adventure. hahahaha "harry's adventure" isn't that funny?

my apologies for not commenting anything constructive but hey i like your story and you , thats wat counts!

dr. jeff says i need to take my pills now...

you-you-you.. brought tears to my eyes! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

i love... you- waaaaaaaaaaaa

You have started a revolution. the first fic where harry's penis is not described as a monstorous peace of meat which oh-oh-OH hermione loves so much....

i have to say it again. i-i-i love you! you stopped predisposing girls/females into believing that bigger is better and that a cock the size of a mountain that rips through her cervix is the way to go!(erg.. those size queens dont they know?? penis>6 inches=abnormal? )

in gods name! i hope every good thing befalls you in time!!! win lotto or something!!!
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author, you have been awarded the medal of justice for mankind, no.. humankind! and best fanfic short story ever written... congratulations-portkey administrator
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i'm going back to study my physics, hope you have a good day!

mmm so nasty, but so loving at the same time
delicious!
thank god for non-prude like H/Hr authors
not much of an author myself, but i love a good read.
Keep em coming genius ^_^

I really liked this one. Please write a seuqaul. I would love that. Bye.
and i love this. story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow this was an interesting fic! I don't think I have ever seen a fic take this point of view!