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this was excellent... it almost made me cry at points... i know exactlly what you are talking about |
Author Feedback: Awww, I hope you didn't cry. I hate to make people cry. But I suppose everyone can relate to some parts of it. I know I can. Thanks for your review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/06
Very good! I usually read H/Hr but this one got my attention and I'm glad cause it is sooo good! And sweet at the end too. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I love the part where Lily & James come home at the end. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/06
Padfood? Otherwise quite nice, would like to know why James broke up with Nicole, could be an interesting piece of drama in that. Keep up the goodwork |
Author Feedback: I didn't really have a reason as to why they broke up. It just wasn't working out. And I suppose James' infatuation with Lily would have played a role too. |
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It was very cute and Fluffy! Loved it alot, and I hope you write more. Again, good job on it! 
-CM |
Author Feedback: I think I'll write another one-shot. Besides, I'm already writing a story, so one-shots are all I can handle right now. ::laughs:: Thanks for taking the time to review! |
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Author Feedback: Aw, I didn't mean to make you cry. Lol. I didn't want to go into so much detail in it. I didn't want it to become a whole story. Just the fact that they got together was enough, I think. |
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ozUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/06
aww i loved this! i was able to follow it, and its such a sweet story!! very nice |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. |
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DawnUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/01/06
nice story. it wasn't hard to follow at all. I especially loved all the breakup scenes and advice. |
Author Feedback: Thank. I thought it was a really cute e-mail and thought it would make a good story. |
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Aw, that's awesome. And I notice you have a few spelling mistakes, like Padfoot, you spelt it with a "d" instead of a "t" at the end. But either than that, it's a great one-shot! |
Author Feedback: Oops.  My bad. Thanks for pointing that out!  |
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Akt5usUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/01/06
Ahhhhh! Very sweet and sentimental! Did Lily like have a game to see who break up the best with her? Lily and James were just perfect! LoVeD iT! |
Author Feedback: No game. Just someone getting their heartbroken. ::sighs:: Lily and James are just so perfect together. I'm glad you liked it ::smiles:: |
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Oh that was soo cute! Really... I love the way you set it up... it was comical, the way you but it!
Great job! This really is the cutest story!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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lilyfan16Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/01/06
o that was cute... But i don't like the idea of James dating someone else other than lily. Espesically Lily's best friend.. no no no.. not good! oTher wise it was really cute and i liked all the breakups!
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Kaci |
Author Feedback: I don't like the thought of her going out with anyone else either, but she did supposedly hate him until 7th year so I doubt she wouldn't of have dated other people until then. Thanks for your review! |
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that was beautiful. tear tear. i'm of to readyour other things because was so well versed, you could have put why she gave him a chance into the story though......thank you for a wondurful........story. all the ones i'm reading right now haven't updated, oh well! 