this was a very pretty story you went through every type of break up! i loved the end though it was very pretty you really showed the james had for lily! Keep writing!!!!!

Very nicely done. I enjoyed the little snippets of time. Poor Lily though! lol The last two snippets were absolutely adorable! Great job!

~Cat~

aww, that was a really awesome fic!! yeah, i needed to read that, i just had a breakup a few days ago, ha, maybe i was meant to read this..........

Aww, this's sweet and I guess something everyone can relate to (except me, curses!) and I really liked it! That last part made me sad. Cause I know what's going to happen now. And I hope it's nowhere near October. Love!

Aww! That was adorable. Great job. I followed that well. However, I thought Nikki liked James or something? But she didn't seem bitter or sad or anything. Humm. Well, it was still purty sweet, cha know.

nice...great story....poor lily though....always get heartbreaks and breakups...well at least james is there in the end...thnk merlin....

I like it. Please write more! Please! You will won't you? You must!

AWW. This is absolutely lovely. It is soo cute I love it!

Aww. i love it. breakups is a harsh topic, but your writing was so good.

I love how you broke each part up.

AWWWW, this is soo freaking cute. I love it.
*sigh*
It gives me butterflies. I like the pacing and everything it's perfect really. Loves the flashes. Excellent work.

that was good...not in love but one of the best Ive read...James as like so awsome!! *goes in to second personality* lily and james forever!!! *changes back* sorry about that, great story!

This story is sweet. It's kind of abrupt though. I know it's a one shot, but it was sort of dificult to follow. Still, good job. Lily sure does get dumped a lot though lol.

I like the story. But I don't see where its going. I mean is it flashbacks or continueing of what happens after Harry.

So where is this going. I don't see how you're going to continue it. I mean is it flashbacks or just after having Harry. Reply to tell me if its going to continue or its completed. Thanks!!!

Very cute and sweet and I like how it moved through time with Lily maturing and their joy at the end.