lol... I love it when the characters have weird thoughts, lol Gotta love it. Oh, and the whole butterbeer in the eye thing, that was priceless. Kudos to you, lol

Ha! Loved it. Absolutely hilarious, so sodding funny I literally nearly wet myself! Brilliant, mate, brilliant.

Keep 'em coming in!

Oh this is extremely funny. I'm loving it.
In you author note you apologized for making Lily OCC but that really wouldn't matter because there really wasn't a lot that Rowling developed with Lily's character. Its up to our imaginations. And yours did a fine job portraying Lily. I love it. Can't wait to read your other work.

Oh god. I love this Lily. There are all sorts of Lily's on fanfiction but this one is one of my favs. This one and Y.Kuang's Predictability, Lily. Excellent personality. Nice technique. Especially where Serius dropped the hint "So it's working." Niceee work.

Awwww...this story is so cute! Ha i loved the part where lily was glaring at his groin area trying to make 'things' dissappear! LOL. It really is a wonderful short story. Maybe you'll write more in the future, only maybe a little lengthier, with a few chapters in stow yeah? i love your stories!
Much Love, JuSt_LiLy

Oh, I knew this story would be good, as I have read all your others! Great job! I really liked Lily's random thoughts in French. Great!

I love the story but is it finished or not the thing says that it isnt but you said that it was a one shot...I do hope that you continue though...

great chapter
i love how Lily's thoughts
are so absurd and yet
extremely hilarious
it was really great
how she was glaring
at his CROTCH!!
haha, and remus
was like, er?
yea sorry, im blabering away
but really it was a great
lil-fic!
xD
keep posting,
and good luck with your future stories
--Amara

Absolutely hilarious! I can't point out all of my favorite parts because I'd be quoting practically the whole thing, but the French part! How you ever came up with her thoughts speaking to her in French is beyond me, but it was perfect. Great job.

That was one of the funniest stories I think I've ever read. I never fully understood the whole insane-Lily thing, but you make it work beautifully. I like the thoughts in French the best, I think.

I liked how you ended it...it was soft and pretty-ish.

Ooh, I just spotted your other story, and I think I'll go read it now. :-D

Awe, that's awesome! I really love it! Great job! You write such wonderful James/Lily fanfics. Can't wait to read the other fanfics you write!

Great story! I love the the title. I hope u update more and soon. I which i depise a boy that likes me now.

Wow! rhis iss a crazy good one. I hardly ever, no more like NEVER read L/J. But your sotry has definitely made me want to read a lot more (especially by you). Great job on this!

... not sure i wanna know what the heck a "lilliputian" is, lol. i love how you portray lily in this, whether she seems "OOC" or not.hey, maybe this is just a side to her that we haven't seen - i mean, she seems more human and more like a *teenage girl* and not *just* a bookworm and whatnot. it was sweet how james actually tried the whole love potion thing like lily had said he would normally do... i'm guessing what sirius was hinting at earlier (well, not hinting, more like blabbing, but w/e, lol) was that james was only trying to make lily jealous. guess he succeeded cute and extremely realistic from a girl's point of view

Oh my god this is one of the funniest and most adorable fics I've ever read. Seriosuly! It's so adorable. I love it. I can't tell you how many times I chuckled (well, snickered is more like it. I was trying not to laugh 'cause the 1st time my little brother came and looked at me as if i was insane...Which wouldnt be too far off but hey. Just kidding. But seriously, it's really funny and cute I love it.