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Mmmm very different and insightful AU, can't wait for the next installment. |
Author Feedback: That's what AU fics are meant to be 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/06
i think that this storey is really cool but i dont like the way lily is gone i like her as a caring mother |
Author Feedback: Well, you can't have everything you want in a story  I don't know how anyone can know what Lily is TRULY like, seeing as she died before canon really did start.... 
But I imagine she would be
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/06/06
That's it? I mean, the chapter wasn't bad but i felt like it was missing something...i don't know, something.
It looks like this came out from nowhere, or that you didn't uplouded the whole chapter.
But it's still a interesting story. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I get that feeling alot more than I would like.... Though to me, it means that I can cure that feeling in the next chapter by answering all those stupid questions!
I'm trying to make this as interesting as possible!
Maow!~ |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/06/06
lol.. fairy tales.. rather funny.. Hermione perspective was quite different.. keep it up! |
Author Feedback: I'm ATTEMPTING, yes attempting, to make this fantastical tale not-cliched. Like an original fantasy themed story, much like a novel one would read or whatever. But I know its going to end up being much like a fairy tale eventually, how else is Harmony going to get together
I think I nailed Hermione's YOUNGER perspective here. How she would think before she became to bookworm know-it-all we all love. Of course, being a low-class citizen means that you cannot get an education, even though Hermione has learnt all that she needs to know from her parents that doesn't mean she can suddenly be promoted to a first-class citizen!
Its all about birth ... that's it really.
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/06/06
ah, finally find out her name as they escape from Malfoy.. but to who.. where are they going.. uh oh, could be bad or good, keep it up! |
Author Feedback: I'm surprised no one remarked about the rock portkey! That means Wizards and Witches are about!
And who's the best of em' all!
You'll see XD
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This scene looked alot like Star Wars, you know in Episode II. Anyway the story is good even though it's a little confusing! I hope you updtae very soon! Iam guessing that the blond man was Malfoy? I dont understand how they got there I hope you explain soon!  |
Author Feedback: I KNEW someone would say that! Yet, when I wrote this the LAST thing on my mind was Star Wars! I'm not even getting any insipiration from the movies, books or games! Ahh!
And to your guess...? Yeah, of course its right. How many other slimy blondie antagonists from the Harry Potter series do you know? XD
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Ohhh! So Lily IS Harry's mom!!! hahaha Iam so dumb! hhahahah! Well... the story is looking good! Me liking it! hahahaha. I like Harry! Its good to see him in control! and not being pushed around or being manipulated! Now I'am even more curious than before!! And Sirius is here wohoo!! |
Author Feedback: One of the rules for an Author on Portkey clearly states that any Author cannot write about Harry's parents being someone other than Lily or James.
I'm guessing Alternate Universe stories also have to abide by those rules...
I'm liking how I write all my characters. Deceptive and intuitive Hermione. Self-centered Jerk Harry. Cocky and advantagous Sirius.
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I didn't understand! Lily isnt Harry's mom?! James is mean?!? humph...well let's see what else you have instore for the story! Because now I am curious! Its just that I like James! Oh well I going to read the next chapter |
Author Feedback: Oh, if you only knew half the things I'm thinking of throwing at you with this fic.... hehehehehhe....
James is a jerk, he's self-centered and very ... pompous. He feels that he's superior to everyone in everyway possible and whenever someone comes close, he has to beat that person to a pulp and show that he/she's NOT better.
*cough* Snape *cough*
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/02/06
Uh oh.. an attack by little people eh? So is Harry the only one to make it.. will he be going back for the emblem? Nice chapter, keep it up!! |
Author Feedback: Heh ... little people. You'll see exactly what happens in the next chapter ^_^. Whenever it comes up is up to my teachers ... and how much homework they give me this week.
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/02/06
Oh Great chapter. I hope you update soon. I suppose Harry is going to wake up somewhere? Hopefully Hermione is there! |
Author Feedback: Oh, Harry's going to wake up somewhere indeed  . Read on to find out whether Granger's there too!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/02/06
lol
omg this is such a good story lol, keeo on writing i cant wait till teh next chaper. dont take too long |
Author Feedback: I too can't wait for the next chapter ! Yeah, sorry about the amount of time it took for this one to come out ... I'm going to try to get the next one out A LOT sooner!!!
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striderSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/02/06
this story is really very good.....I like how its a little bit of Lord of the Rings, a little bit of Star Wars, and a little more than a little bit of Harry Potter. Question though will harry be the long lost king of the the wizarding world? I am looking forward to any and all future installments. |
Author Feedback: I didn't mean to have any relation towards Star Wars, but all the same, I'm really liking how this fic's turning out!
And as to the question of the acclaimed "Long Lost King" ... look out for updates for that .
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/02/06
the idea is good, but it seems to me that its a mix of star wars and harry potter, and i dont like star wars that much. but otherwise, it is a very descriptive and imaginative story.Great job! |
Author Feedback: I'm trying to be as original as possible. But I can't help but steal ideas from the things that influenced me since childhood! I've been growing up with both Harry Potter and Star Wars, so this claim isn't that surprising.
For the descriptive and imaginative part, I tries me best ... I tries me best. ^_^
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Continue, COntinue, Continue, Continue!!! I like this story alot and i would enjoy reading it more often! Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: I will attempt to do so. Just continue enjoying what I offer ^_^
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/01/06
So Harry's kind've a combination of say Strider and Faramir... possibly Borimir? Or that's what it seems to me so far.. Sirius Black, eh? This should be fun.. nice start.. definitely intruiging. keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Hahhahaha, no no no. Harry's, Harry! I'd say the Rangers are kinda ... influenced by Faramir's company, but nothing more than that. I mean, there's no ring of power is there?
But will it stay that way for long...?
Hahha, just kidding, no Lord of the Rings/Harry Potter mixes, I'd hate to write in Tolkein's style....
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