hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
aawww... poor ron but it's true... it has always been harry and hermione from the beginning... so good fanfiction... but don't worry Ron, Luna is there.!!!
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
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XavielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/05/06
Very angsty, I like the end the best. That last sentence really tied it up nicely. |
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Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. I feel bad for Ron in this, but at the same time, it's just so right. I love how you brought in their first meeting together, and how right the lyrics are to this. Great job!  |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/06
Awwww that is so sad. . . for ron anyway o well too bad for him. . . |
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okay... I guess it's the way you write... when you leave your reader at the edge of their seats but anyway.. this is really nice. I enjoy reading every bit of it... how you're story is so subtle and yet strikingly affirming.... toodles. |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much.  |
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lemon5225Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/06
that's so sad. i feel so bad for ron. hmm... is that allowed? i thought sympathetic feelings for ron were strictly outlawed here. no, i'm joking, it's a lovely piece of writting. |
Author Feedback: Don't worry, I feel quite bad for him too. I do love Ron, just not enough to let him get what he wants when it comes to Hermione. /is mean. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
Aww...that is too bad. Poor Ron. Of course, we always have known that Harry and Hermione were desitined to love each other.   Great fic. |
Author Feedback: Yes, poor Ron indeed. I'm glad you liked it! |
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oh poor Ronny... well, not exactly, seeing as though I'm allll about Harry and Hermione!! cool little one-shot. I think you've done a wonderful job capturing his gut feelings. well done!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you! This is my first attempt at writing from Ron's POV, so I'm very glad it worked for you. |
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The last line is perfect! I think you've portrayed Ron's pov marvelously and your tone is very powerful. Figurative language, all of it, combines to make even a short fic very..informative, I suppose is the word I want. Anyway, great job! |
Author Feedback: >>The last line is perfect!>>
*beams* Thank you! I guess that was the main point of the piece, so I'm glad it worked and didn't come off as being too corny or too forced. |
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Cas121689Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
Thats really sad, but really well written. i like it a lot. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. |
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PapertrailUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
Awww--- see, we could love Ron if he was written well, and your trademark style too! Do tell if you are on livejournal, please?
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Author Feedback: Heh. thank you!
I do have an LJ - it's at http://msgenevieve.livejournal.com/ - feel free to visit. |
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oh, how sad. poor ron...  well wriiten. i enjoyed reading it.
nichole |
Author Feedback: Yes, poor boy. I'm glad you liked it! |
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KatakaliSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
Oh no... poor, poor Ron. I mean it. This is the very first fic that really makes me feel for him at not getting the girl. In fact I´m now feeling kind of a H/HR traitor because by the end of this I wanted  Ron to get together with HErmione at the very least for a little while so he, by himself can figure out that they are not meant to be a couple but good friends.
Despite this unexpected feeling, I love this little story. I´ve never heard from you and thanks to this discovery I will read all your other stories as well.
Happy writing.
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Author Feedback: I know the feeling - it almost makes me want to *write* that story, lol!
I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you enjoy my other stories. |
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