AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/08
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/07
Wow . . . I mean . . . WOW! Passionate, physical and descriptive, in more ways than one. The economy of dialogs you use is wonderful, how you build up to the verbal speaking of an actual word. You describe passion graphically, which (at least for shy violets like me) can sometimes be very disconcerting, but you are able to make it palatable- just at that limit before the scene becomes some kind of full-on porn, but very evocative.
I look forward to reading more of your work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/10/07
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Wow, nice. I'll have to go look for your other stories at some point! Either way, I'm really quite impressed, and wonderful job. Do continue! You have a talent, and don't waste it. I'm impressed you got through as much as you did in a one-shot deal, and I must say, it was refreshing to read - not quite as hot and heavy as a lot of Lily and James fics tend to be. Keep up the good work, and do continue!  |
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this is a very good story and i am glad i took the time to read it. i can't wait to read the other things you have wrote. i love lily and james stories and i think this is one of my favorites. can't wait to read more. |
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SophinnaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/04/06
Wow, that seriously blew me away. It was fantastic! Keep up the great work... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/03/06
make the next chapter Harry and Hermionen please besides Lily and James Harry and Hermione are my favorite couple together |
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One of the VERY few and rare NC-17 L/J fics out there. I like it. Me and my dirty mind... lol! |
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umm, yeah.... well i'll just go and take a cold shower  awesome story. Don't you think it's so nice when authors update soo quickly??(hint hint) |
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Let me just say this....holy shit, that was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. |
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lilyfan06Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/06
very good. i am still not totally sure what's going on, but i can't wait for you to update. |
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ozUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/01/06
wow i loved this story! please write another lily/james story!! your really talented! keep up the work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for your thoughts!
Actually, I have been turning over - in my mind - the possibility of a Lily/James fic... the only thing that is eluding me is an original storyline.
And - I am SO GLAD you liked this story. It means so much to me! 
If you have any ideas - ket me know!
Island Girl |
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AlorkinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/06
Wow! The day started bad and got worse. Good start. I love the way you have Lily taking out her aggressions on the car. Slamming doors, yelling, shifting hard etc. Mmmm! A long hot bath...my favorite way to unlax, especially if I have someone there with me. The build up was almost Hitchcockian (is that a word?) with the iuntruder being unknown until the very last and the only words between them, commands. The sex was nice and hot, just the way I lick...uh, like it. Well done. Alorkin |
Author Feedback: My friend --
It was so good to see you name in the review bo! WHOOOHOOO!
Yeah - I am a fan of hard, fast sex myself! And - who hasn't been there with a really bad day?
YOU ROCK!
Island Girl |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/06
oooh this was gooood.....is this only a one-shot? so are they not yet married and are only going out or had a fight or what?? i was kinda confused, but only a little....this was good....and i was also kinda confused....anal sex right? (how can that be fun??) |
Author Feedback: Oh I am so glad you enjoyed this!
As for a one shot - I thought it would only be fair to write Lily's retribution - don't you?
As it stands, the story is not a post fight scenario... Have you eber been in the situation where you are in one place, your committed other is in another and the only way you can live with the separation is knowing that it was only temporary? That is the scene in which this is set.
Orginally, I did consider anal sex - but I thought I read somewhere that THAT kind of description was not allowed on this site. So - I changed it. The story is definately hard, fast, vaginal sex.
If you are interested, I have 4 other H/Hr stories. 2 are one shots, and the other 2 are multichaptered. I would love to know what you think!
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Hey! Awesome Lily/James story. I was just wondering if it was going to be a one-shot story? |
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