dun dun dun dun.... i wonder who it is.... I can't wait to find out in the next chapter! 
*%* Susanna *%* |
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Ha the way you have it started out is rally very good and I can't wait to see what you will do with the rest of it.
*%* Susanna *%* |
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I like it =) can't wait till the next chapter, always interesting to read about different ways that lily and james get together... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/08/06
This is really good, don't stop writing please I really want to know what happens next! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/03/06
was an awkward mid-date meeting really nessicary? couldn't they discuss potions that night in the common room or something? and since when is james the one reminding lily about due dates? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/03/06
wait... so Melody and Katie are the same person? that's not confusing in the least. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/03/06
It's really good so far! Update! Can't wait to see what happens next and when do adam and lily break up? |
Author Feedback: I can't tell you that! Wait and see. xD |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
 Hey..
Awsome story so far..
but I still don't know why you stoped writing that one story, I read...like your first one..
I love that one..
anyways...
keep writing..and letting me read first..
haha.. see ya at school..
From you biggest fan..
as you wrote in my agenda..
and the only person who has your autograph.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/06
Hey..
Awsome story so far..
but I still don't know why you stoped writing that one story, I read...like your first one..
I love that one..
anyways...
keep writing..and letting me read first..
haha.. see ya at school..
From you biggest fan..
as you wrote in my agenda..
and the only person who has your autograph.
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Author Feedback: I've paused it for the moment so I can like catch up on homework and stuff because I have so many assignments I haven't handed in.
Lol, see you at school. Wait a second, you're sitting right next to me while I type this. 
x0x0x Love ya. xD |
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GinSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/01/06
I love this story, especially now that the whole Katie/Melody thing is figured out. :-) Though, I must say Sirius really is my favorite character, he really is well done. |
Author Feedback: Thank you xD
If James didn't exist, Sirius would be my favourite character too.
Well... that's not true.
I like:
1) James
2) Ron
3) Sirius
In that order  |
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GinSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/01/06
Sorry, I just noticed in the next chapter that you mentioned the Katie error. That'll teach me to review before reading a whole story. :-) |
Author Feedback: It's quite alright |
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GinSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/01/06
Okay, so I'm confused, who is this Katie that keeps popping up? Is she Melody in a clever disguise?
But, I like how everything is very age appropriate, nobody seems overly or underly mature as the do in some stories. |
Author Feedback: Since I read all three of your reviews just now, I guess you figured out the whole Katie/Melody thing xD |
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BrittUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/01/06
This story is getting interesting!  I can't wait until the James/Lily action in the next chapter!  Haha. Hope you do well on your exams!
--Britt |
Author Feedback: Thank you! My exams were over yesterday and I have a week off xD
I'll try and update tomorrow or the day after because right now, I just want to sleep xD
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i love lily n james, have u written anymore fanfic's coz id like to read them and i love fluff and twists remember to put in loads of fluff's and twists |
Author Feedback: Yes, I have ^^
You can find them by clicking my name thingy. |
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i sorry i didn't read immediatly as i would have normally but ive been really busy but im glad ive read it now, thnks 4 replying to my reviwes i just really wont 2 no when james n lily will get together? and how long do you plan this story to be? Also 5 chapters in what 6 days is very good and im looking forward to the next chapter, hope to hear from you soon
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Author Feedback: Well, Lily wont change her mind about James until near the end of the year, because they're not supposed to get together until seventh year. But! But, that doesn't mean they wont...
Again, I can't say or it'll spoil the story =D |
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