JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/06
Ah yes...Kissing Lessons...a totally great fic I once knew...oh, what's that? You swear you're working on it? Bloody good thing too - us obsessive people can be dangerous if crossed, you know... (knock over the writer's block and shoot the bunnies, will you please?)
Now, about this story...
What was meant to be, indeed - excellent, perfect ending!! Thank you!
JanieB |
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Aww, I thought this was really cute. A little OOC, but still cute regardless. I truly believe Harry and Hermione are meant to be together, despite what happens in the books. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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omg this is GREAT. you have an AMAZING gift. I loved it... what I love is how Ron said that... hold lemme find the quote,
“Hermione, something you feel for a complete stranger isn’t love.” yet he's left her for what sounds like many other girls... I prolly would have punched him... but that's me
keep it up
-megz- |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/06
Great story. But I have to go with the others and say it would really be nice to read the end of kissing lessons. If you want some ideas I would be happy to offer some! |
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CroixSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
I - it - you -
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This was absurdly amazing, and I loved it. Bravo! (: |
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this was good
i have a question
WHAT IS HAPPENING WITH KISSING LESSONS FOR THE BEGINNER? I WANT TO READ THE FINAL CHAPTER! |
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annieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
aw you know what this kinda reminds me of?
the notebook
the whole chooseing for you and what you want not whats going to make other people happy. so good |
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cool. glad she chose harry (of course) and although I don't like ron, I don't think he'd cheat on herms but it worked for this story.
well done. |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
I liked the plot bunny, I like most of your work keep posting. I only found Kissing Lessons a short time ago so I don't feal I have a right to conplane but sitck with it thru the writters block it will be worth it. Keep up the good work & good luck. |
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That was excellent! Excellent characterisations! I liked that Harry had her make the decision for herself, and treated her with respect and tenderness. So completely opposite to Ron. I can't believe that he still tried to play the victim, but she had all the cards on her side, so he really had no case. I also thought that the fact that she went to her mother's before returning to Harry signalled that she knew what she was doing consciously, and with Harry was where she wanted to be.
After all, it is inevitable... |
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DrakeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
It was excellent, very, very, good.
I still want the ending to Kissing Lessons. Please. Pretty please. |
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A cautionary tale, very classic! I must say that ordinarily I don't like the fics that involve cheating etc, but I think this one was very well done and classy. And I think the characterization was spot on--especially that Hermione spent most of the day with her mother, which shows that she was taking such a big decision seriously. Right. Anyway, great one-shot! Have you considered taking it further to see how Ron plays out? |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
Nice chapter. Not quite a way I supposed Ron and Hermione would ever break up. You have done a very good job on this one. Keep up the good work. Yours, Pepperoni |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
That was good. I have never thought that Harry should be with anyone but Hermione. Ron would never be able to satisfy her body, soul, and mind like Harry could. (So much for HBP huh?) This is a great one shot. Enjoyed it very much.. Go GO Pumpkin Pie! |
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