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Wow. You're totally turning me into a Harry/Hermione shipper. I think I need to try writing some--I've written about every other pairing out there except Harry Hermione (and slash, of course) but this site is absolutely amazing. Harry/Hermione has so much potential.
THanks for sharing your talent! There's a lot of stories here you should post over at fanfiction.net. |
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I always imagined it would have been something like this. Ron has never, not in 7 books, ever been to Hermione what Harry is. They have never had anything close to all the romantic, loving and complete trust in each other that Harry and Hermione have. Excellent story!  |
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it was very objective, hu? Without many detais... not refering to the kinky ones... but i thinkthat u wrote everything u wante to.. nice}!
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I love the first few sections of this story. I think you captured that feeling of attraction really well, something that I am sure a lot of your readers, including myself, can identify with. I'm a fan of your writing style, and I love reading your stories. I wish that you wrote longer ones, though it seems that Kissing Lessons took a while for you to finish (but the result was definitely worth it!  ). Anyway, keep on writing and I can't wait for your next story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/06
AWW! Cute! Cute! Cute! Ron had it comin'! This shiats off the chain!!
PEACE
Thanks for the read. |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/06
Wow! That was wonderful! Ron can be such an...yeah, well, you know. The sad thing is, I could really see him being that way, too...taking advantage of her and expecting her to always be waiting right there for him to return.
Thank goodness Hermione's a smart girl and she saw it all for what it was and chose the right man [like there was any doubt].
Beautifully portrayed...EXCELLENT writing.
Thank you. |
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I do not know if I have already reviewed this fic after the first time I read this, but I seriously doubt it considering what a horrible reviewer I am. So any ways, after reading it again just now I decided to tell you what a wonderful story it is. I love the way you wrote the dancing scene between Harry and Hermione. You mangaged to make it seem so sensual and real, I could just see it before my eyes as if it was happening right before me. I loved that Harry told Hermione to choose for herself, not for him or Ron or anyone else. To me, that shows just how much he truly loves and cares for her. And it totally reminded me of Noah in 'The Notebook', who of course was a total sweetie. As is Harry. The break up scene was wonderful as well. And of course the ending, I mean who could not love a happy Harry and Hermione ending. I absolutely love you writing and this is definitely no exception.
~Elisabeth~ |
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Thats an excellent short story wrapping up the murky and somewhat confused love trianle. i'm very impressed! great story! |
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i like this story, it has kind of a weird plot for me koz i dnt ever want hermione to be with ron but then u made it soud ok and good. I love they jus fel in love all of a sudden its soooo adorable. |
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JamesUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
Damn your a hell of a writer!
I first read your kissing lessons for the beginner on fanfiction.net and on the last chapter I saw your author note stating for the NC 17 version come here or your livejournal page. well I couldnt find your livejournal page so I came here but to my dismay even though this site said it was NC17 of that story it read exactly the same as the one on fanfiction.net.
But back to this story, I simple loved it. I wished I could write like this, I have tried and since I can't for the life of me write descent dialogue then I'm screwed. But enough about me, love your story can't wait to read the others. |
Author Feedback: About Kissing Lessons - the version here -is- NC-17, but the only chapter with NC-17 content is seven, so the first six will read exactly the same.
And thanks for the review. ^^ |
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hey....um i wanted to let you know i love your fics but could i just bother you to FINISH kissing lessons for the beginner? if you already have could you send me a link or something? man, i'm telling you this fic is awesome - i love to read your fics over and over and over....until the last book comes out i'm gonna be addicted to this stuff. lol. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/02/06
short but sweet story. i liked it alot and look forward to more if they are to come |
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Yet another fantastic Amethyst fic! Please keep up the good work on your writing and don't give up on H/Hr like some authors have, no matter what happens in book 7.
I'm glad to know that your still going to finish kissing lessons, god knows we all want that ending SO badly. And with this fic im officially adding you to my favorite authors list! Can't wait for the "bloody ending"!
~pb |
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hey great fic....good one...just do write something longer...most of your fics are one-short,please do consider to write something more lengthier....your writing style is cool...so think bout it.best of luck. |
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