This is a really nice story. Really sweet how much they care for each other and how they practically think the same. I think it's a perfect timing to tell Hermione how he feels. Just before they go on a journey that might do a lot of harm. Very awesome!

the story was gret but i hope there will be a second part of it. continue doing a great story like this.

ok, the beggining was preety good, but the end where they admited their feelings was just stupid
rework the end

Nice title, very fitting! So, we all know that H/Hr is inevitable at portkey, and Ginny seemed to take it so well, but will it be so easy for Ron? I guess I'll have to wait and see!

Nice story. It will be interesting to see where you take it from here. The possiblities are endless!

Wow! Fast-paced as in the feelings change so fast! I think they should remain friends at least a little longer! just my opinion..

sweet and fluffy.... although I felt like it was a bit abrupt.... I guess when you're gonna be part of a big battle between good and evil you tend to hasten up a bit.but none the less I love the nice butterfly feel it gives me...

That was really good. I liked the way you eneded it with the prospect of them still having to go out and fight but still having each other. I liked seeing Hermione's parents the way you percieved them. Good perception. Lovely fic!

I'm all choked up inside. Beautiful. Absolutely adorable. A few grammatical errors, but easily read over because of the content. I adore it, do continue. (:

I like it very much. It's romantic, even though they don't even kiss. Very nice.

I really enjoyed reading this story, but I think it's lacking backround detail. When did Harry realize his feelings for Hermione, and when did she do the same? Why does Ginny realize that Harry feels this way about Ginny? How did they break up? What happened with Ron and Hermione. I realize that Harry and Hermione shippers don't like writing about Ron and Hermione and Harry and Ginny, but for many stories, this one included, it is needed. YOu don't have to go into great detail, but the effect of these relationships changes their futures and future realationships with each other. If you are going to make reference to things like that, make sure that the reader is aware of it. There is really only one indication that Harry likes Hermione before he actually tells her how he feels.
I look forward to reading the next chapter, and keep on sailing HMS Harmony!

That was a great start,this post was really good and i can't wait to read more,please post more soon

Um...okay...really really fast and with no real explanation as to why so many of these things are happening. Why at the grangers house? Why was it so easy for Hermione's parents to grasp the concept of her not going to school and the whole danger thing? Why and how did Harry realize his feelings and tell her so randomly. There was no build up. None. You have a good concept just expand and slow down. Writing isn't a race. Go deeper into the emotions and reasons of the characters and their actions.

that was so lovely and sweet. I love the imagery in Harry's loneliness melting away in Hermione's arms!