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Bingblot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/07
Awwww, this was so beautiful and so very sweet. I love these fics where Harry realizes just what kind of girl he needs and that it's Hermione, always has been. She really is the girl who will love him for him and will listen to him.

Minor thing and this is more a personal issue, but I don't really like the use of 'Mione' in fics. We never see it in canon and somehow, I can't see Hermione being someone who really responds to cutesy nicknames.

But that aside, this was just perfect.
Hmm, I wonder what (silly) bloke Ginny just got engaged to...
Author Feedback: I know, I know , but this is one cliche I enjoy. I'm such a sucker for nicknames.
 

hermy415
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
awww... hermione is that girl huh? i loved the fiction!!!!!.. so sweet... at first i thought he was really jealous but then, he was just lost because he thought of her as always waiting.. but he's not anymore.. coz hermione showed him the way...

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!
Author Feedback: Thank you
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
That was a really great story. I think I might just have to go and read all of your short stories. I love one shots.

I really liked how they were in the rain..lovely job.
Author Feedback: Thanks, I enjoy one shots as well.

Thank you for the wonderful compliment.
 

katediggory
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/04/06
i love this - such a sweet and tender moment, and they totally understand each other
Author Feedback: Thank you
 

h/hr4ever11
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/03/06
I read this story before. Sorry that I never actually reviewed. Now that I am writing the review I want you to know that it's a lovely story. I really like it and it fills me with hapiness. I've always been a h/hr shipper so it gives me joy to read this kind of story. Keep up the good work, you're awesome!
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I'm so happy that that you enjoyed it so.
 

danfan4ever
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/06
oh my goodness! so so so cute! you did an excellent job! i could not imagine a better response to this challenge... the thoughts do not have to be said to know that they are meant and heart felt! great job! give yourself a pat on the back! LOL
Love,
danfan4ever
Author Feedback: Lucky for you my arms are flexible enough

Thank you for the nice review. I just didn't see them being said...I heard them in my head, not rolling off my tongue.
 

karenkate_kitty
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/06
that was so fluffy.... awww... butteflies... cotton candies... and sweet stories that I just fancy... good job
Author Feedback:

Thanks, glad you liked it.
 

vulcanarcher
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
This was just...wow...touching beyond words. I love the way you wrote it. I've read many fics that try to imitate this style, but never really work. Let me say that you're the first that I've read to actually suceed in this. You've got everything flowing so smoothly in this, very enjoyable to read. I also like how you've portrayed the characters. Hermione is accepting, and Harry is still learning. Great job!
Author Feedback:

I've got to say, wow, in return. That was probably the most encouraging review I've eer recieved. Thank you so much. That is really how I see Hermione, as very accepting of Harry even when she disagrees with him.
 

seleene_paris
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
That was really lovely. I really enjoyed your story, in case you did not notice. I wanted also to let you know that I will be letting my yahoo group about your story on a new thread on our message board. Here is the yahoo group in case you are wondering: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Thirdfloorcorridor/
I cannot wait to read more from you.

God bless,
S'Eleene Paris
-Owner of the Third-Floor Corridor yahoo group
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much for the nice review and for the free advertising , I'll have to check the group out.
 

Ellipses
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
It was...sweet, but short! It was rather adorable until I realised how quickly it would end. However, I really liked it and although I have a love/hate relationship with open endings (love them for artistic purposes and hate them cos you're just too curious), it was all rather appropriate. And thank you for skipping the details about the kiss--there's nothing cheesier than a whole paragraph describing one. Good job
Author Feedback: LOL, thank you so much, I didn't want the kiss to be the object of the story.
 

kbluesmom
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was so sweet! I nearly went into sugar overload but that is not a bad thing where this is concerned. Exceptionally fluffy (like your favorite blanket) and perfectly sweet (like a favorite chocolate. Absolutely loved it!
Author Feedback: Whoo hoo, my story is comforting then. Though instead of my favorite chocolate, how about pumpkin pie?
 

stu14688
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
Oh, that is adorable! Very well written! I just read a couple of very dramatic and angsty stories, so I needed the fluff! Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the encouragement.
 

ladylaughalot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was really cute. I love it when Harry and Hermione kiss in the rain...
Author Feedback: Thank you very much
 

Cutie Blossom
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was such a sweet and innocent story! ^^ Just a nice short one-shot!
Author Feedback: Thank you for taking time to review.
 

usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was a very cute fic. Very adorable that they kissed in the rain. That'd be lovely of them to do it in teh book!!!!
Author Feedback: Wouldnt' it? I wish they would, lol. Thanks for taking the time to review.
 

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