BingblotSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/07
Awwww, this was so beautiful and so very sweet. I love these fics where Harry realizes just what kind of girl he needs and that it's Hermione, always has been. She really is the girl who will love him for him and will listen to him.
Minor thing and this is more a personal issue, but I don't really like the use of 'Mione' in fics. We never see it in canon and somehow, I can't see Hermione being someone who really responds to cutesy nicknames.
But that aside, this was just perfect.
Hmm, I wonder what (silly) bloke Ginny just got engaged to... |
Author Feedback: I know, I know  , but this is one cliche I enjoy. I'm such a sucker for nicknames. |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
awww... hermione is that girl huh? i loved the fiction!!!!!.. so sweet... at first i thought he was really jealous but then, he was just lost because he thought of her as always waiting.. but he's not anymore.. coz hermione showed him the way...
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
That was a really great story. I think I might just have to go and read all of your short stories. I love one shots.
I really liked how they were in the rain..lovely job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I enjoy one shots as well.
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. |
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i love this - such a sweet and tender moment, and they totally understand each other |
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I read this story before. Sorry that I never actually reviewed. Now that I am writing the review I want you to know that it's a lovely story. I really like it and it fills me with hapiness. I've always been a h/hr shipper so it gives me joy to read this kind of story. Keep up the good work, you're awesome! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I'm so happy that that you enjoyed it so. |
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oh my goodness! so so so cute! you did an excellent job! i could not imagine a better response to this challenge... the thoughts do not have to be said to know that they are meant and heart felt! great job! give yourself a pat on the back! LOL
Love,
danfan4ever |
Author Feedback: Lucky for you my arms are flexible enough
Thank you for the nice review. I just didn't see them being said...I heard them in my head, not rolling off my tongue. |
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This was just...wow...touching beyond words. I love the way you wrote it. I've read many fics that try to imitate this style, but never really work. Let me say that you're the first that I've read to actually suceed in this. You've got everything flowing so smoothly in this, very enjoyable to read. I also like how you've portrayed the characters. Hermione is accepting, and Harry is still learning. Great job! |
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That was really lovely. I really enjoyed your story, in case you did not notice. I wanted also to let you know that I will be letting my yahoo group about your story on a new thread on our message board. Here is the yahoo group in case you are wondering: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Thirdfloorcorridor/
I cannot wait to read more from you.
God bless,
S'Eleene Paris
-Owner of the Third-Floor Corridor yahoo group |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much for the nice review and for the free advertising  , I'll have to check the group out. |
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EllipsesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
It was...sweet, but short! It was rather adorable until I realised how quickly it would end. However, I really liked it and although I have a love/hate relationship with open endings (love them for artistic purposes and hate them cos you're just too curious), it was all rather appropriate. And thank you for skipping the details about the kiss--there's nothing cheesier than a whole paragraph describing one. Good job  |
Author Feedback: LOL, thank you so much, I didn't want the kiss to be the object of the story. |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was so sweet! I nearly went into sugar overload but that is not a bad thing where this is concerned. Exceptionally fluffy (like your favorite blanket) and perfectly sweet (like a favorite chocolate. Absolutely loved it! |
Author Feedback: Whoo hoo, my story is comforting then. Though instead of my favorite chocolate, how about pumpkin pie? |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
Oh, that is adorable! Very well written! I just read a couple of very dramatic and angsty stories, so I needed the fluff! Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the encouragement. |
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That was really cute. I love it when Harry and Hermione kiss in the rain... |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much |
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That was such a sweet and innocent story! ^^ Just a nice short one-shot! |
Author Feedback: Thank you for taking time to review. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06
That was a very cute fic. Very adorable that they kissed in the rain. That'd be lovely of them to do it in teh book!!!! |
Author Feedback: Wouldnt' it? I wish they would, lol. Thanks for taking the time to review. |
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