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While She Was Sleeping

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/07
I 've made two reviews on this story and so far I'm the only two anonymys but I really would like you to continue this story. But if your not You could at least tell us
I'm just kidding, I woul;d just like to know if your gonna continue.
 

Mione7
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/07
That was cute! I wonder how Hermione will react when she wakes up in Harry's bed? lol
 

hermy415
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
aww... that is so sweet... i wanna know what happened when hermione woke up and realized she's in harry's bed... so please, update soon!!!

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/06
i know i told you yesterday to please continue this story and once again I'm gonna say it,please,please,please,please,please,please, continue this story this is the best writing i've ever read, so let me tell you again your a really,really,really,reallllllly good writer!PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/06
I noticed you only have 9 reviews but i really think you should continue this story, please, please, please, please,PLEASE!Your really, really, really,really,really,good!!!!!
 

Darkphoenix2500
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/06
.......Erm im really not sure whats going on....hermione falls asleep and harry takes her to his bed.....thats about all i got out of it
 

greenlantern
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
See, that’s really nice. Although, I think it would have been nice if you had given us the scene of them waking up in the morning. You’ve got a very good premise here, and a lot of potential, but I think you’re being a little too succinct to really give this story everything it deserves. I used to have the same problem. What you want to do is flesh out the story as much as you can, without becoming mundane. For example, when he was carrying her up the stairs, what was he thinking? I would imagine he was thinking about more than how much it would hurt if he were to try to bring her up to her own room.
 

Sailor Universe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
that was so cute! i can see ahrry carrying hermione upstairs to his room so she could sleep comfortably (i can also imagine hermione waking up screamin or something, lol). it'd be so nice if she were awake during that, though... oi
soooooooo adorable!
 

pottergirlajg
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
Aww! This was so cute! I hope there are more chapters to come! Hurry and update ASAP please!

 

Lils
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06

Oh, this is just so wonderful! I could almost see it happening. And no, it's NOT AU!!!!! (HBP is AU, though. )
Keep updating, please!
 

Animagus-Steph
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
oh my gosh--this had to be about the sweetest thing i have ever read in my entire existance. the last line was so pleasantly funny--oh, how nice it would be to see her reaction when she woke up!!

This was truly a pleasant read--your wording was well done, and I enjoyed every bit of it! Thank you!
 

Nice
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
wow. i mean it's simple enough but so much more i just love it, it's so...h/h at its best. i mean you made me hold my breath for a moment with the story.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
I like I like great beginning please update soon awesome story !!
 

Jake_Timothy_Potter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/06
That was one nice fic and I hope that you update sooooon cause I want to read more pleazeeee
 

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