i think Ron's letter sounded quite mature. Like when he said that he loves her but she betrayed him and her promise was worthless. Or it must be the great wording that i love.

Ending was abrupt, but i liked it. It was also simple. the start of something new and great. I just wish it was explained why the affair did start. Why was Hermione unhappy after 6 weeks of marriage? Was it because she realised she loved Harry?

But i did very much enjoy reading this.
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Sheryl

That was very sweet and romantic. It had a very good plot twist! I love this story and please continue writing! You have something a lot of people don't have......... talent!

It is a really good ending to the story, and really well written. It had a real good story line with real good smut. sequel?

It is a really good first chapter, and really well written. It has a real good story line with real good smut.

oh why oh why did you potray me as such?????

when i first read this story, i thought the end was a bit rushed though the plot and all was great. when i reread it now, i kind of understand harry's seemingly indifferent reaction towards ron at the end. he might have feeled alarmed and panic if hermione choose ron over him when he saw she was crying over ron. so i now love your story and your ending style of it a whole a lot more.

hey.i like the smut in ur story a lot....But u r rite.it does seem a bit lame....maybe u cud have shown what happens to ron and made it a more happier ending..

Omg what in the world. It was very very graphic. Yet I like it. No I it. I read a previous fanfic of yours and decided to read another one. As ar as I am reading, I think that Hermione is having a affair on Ron with Harry. If so then I like it. I really hate Ron. As you can tell from the last review I gave you. I am gong to read the next chapter. Your are really good at thid fan fic thing.

Great story but how come Hermione got married to Ron if she loved Harry? Sorry if you answered this already.

Did not see any errors in your story. Well done, can't wait for more!!

Good start.. I really enjoyed it. It was both tender and raw. Keep up the graphics thats what makes it real.

I think we should follow Ron on his quest for self enlightenment to see what path he will be taking after his betrayal from his two closests friends

i would just like to say, i liked it. it was a cute story and pretty much that sums it up, just a story. the ending was short and not quite as sweet, but it still proves that Hermoine and Harry belong together. nice job

Well, I'm going to join the voices of several other reviewers about how quickly Harry and Hermione get over Ron. It is just way too sudden. I'm going to be a bit more vicious than most though, and say that this reflects very poorly on them both. I mean sheesh, some friends! They both betrayed Ron in a very fundamental way, and then just say "He's gone." Toward sthe end, it sounded more like "Oh well. He's gone. What's for dinner?" It's almost like they said what they thought they were expected to say, and not really what they felt.

Hermione started off well, pointing out that he is their friend and whatnot, but Harry ruined that potential chance at showing humanity by interrupting with his "I love you." and they never went back. Honestly I hope Ron never comes back to them. He doesn't need friends that a) betray him so, and b) don't really seem to care that they hurt him.

I can see H/Hr as time goes by, wistfully sighing over some bittersweet memory of poor Ron. On holidays they will wonder aloud what Ron is doing. When watching a game, they would imagine what Ron would say to a particular move or score. And then they will go screw like bunnies.

Shrug, I just don't feel like they truly regret hurting Ron. I'm not saying I would like to see angst and melencholy dripping from every word spoken and every move taken, but they should be feeling guilt up the wazoo and I just don't see much of that. This is a sorrow they should feel the rest of their lives.

Perhaps another chapter? Forty years down the line? We see the characters in old age. Harry and Hermione grew old together, happily married, maybe with kids, but with the memory of Ron always with them (especially if their own kids have good friends at Hogwarts). Pictures of him on their mantle, scrapbooks with pictures of their times at Hogwarts, etc. Fond but painful memories. And then they bump into him for the first time in all those years. They find out that he lived a full life as well, perhaps with Luna, and has been happy too. He has no real interest in renewing their friendship, but knowing that he lived his life happy would be a small weight off of H/Hr's minds. A chapter such as this would show that they really do regret hurting him, and would show that while some things can be forgiven, they cannot really be forgotten.

Just my two cents. Sorry if it came off as a bit strong. I personally think infidelity is one of the wost things a person can do, and I'm usually a little harsh with stories that use it as a main plot point. ^_^;

i liked this...it was cute...and sad that it never really does work out for ron...hopefully he met luna somewhere!!!