AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 12/05/08
Absolutely Beautiful. You went so in depth into the characters. I\'m so impressed. I love a mature Ron |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/05/08
Very cool. I love this Ron, a real, growing up Ron. Just brilliant. |
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ooh interesting - I actually love to see Ron and Ginny's perspective on H/Hr - and you capture it particularly well. I *think* I'm reading the stories in the right order...but I don't mind anyway, I'm reading and loving them all! You really *get* H/hr and I'm so happy to have found your writing  thanks for replies too x |
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you so just made me late for an appointment  I love the way you write them aaargh I'm addicted  perfect. looking forward to next chapter  |
Author Feedback: Haha sorry! I hope it wasn't a vital appointment or something!
So happy to hear you are liking this story. This one is my favourite I think, although it could happen, the dream part... Oh, you know the III and IV are the next actual chapters, right? I think I am making people confuse with the hole number system, but they are different fics, only part of one story.
Anyway, thank you so so SO much for your reviews!
madelaine |
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oh I love the way you write h/Hr - did I read that English is not your 1st language? I can't believe that! The way you convey the inner feelings is so perceptive and eloquent. Beautifully written  |
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wow. if i havent mentioned it in my previous reviews .. your a great writter. i couldnt help but feel hermione's angst in this chapter. i'm not sure if i over read it .. but i wonder if she's with ron. i guess i'll find out in the other stories. =D |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/12/07
Oh my god, I love all your series, but TBBTF must be my favourite of them all. It's so difficult to write second person, yet you pulled it off genially.
One of the best pieces of writing around, dear Madelaine.
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Author Feedback: Why tahnk youm, dear anonymous  If you want to know something, is one of my favourites too. The second person made ME the one sitting on that bench, hence feeling everything with more intensity.
Thanks whoever you are! |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/12/07
> He knew very well what a tease she was, and that
> she liked the fact that people ogled her red mane
> of hair…among other things.
This was written before DH was published, yes? Clever of you to get that right, about Ginny ... as soon as I read that I recalled the 'low cut dress' that Ms. Weasley wore at the wedding, and her wink at Harry.
> There were certain limits. Even for Ginny.
Yay!
Some good stuff here, although I felt Hermione's profession of love at the end was a bit sudden and felt a bit abrupt. |
Author Feedback: Brad dear!
You know you're probably making the most incredible bunch of reviews in such a short time, right? I love them, lol.
Yep, this was all written and thought before DH. There's a reason as to why I didn't study quantic physics, but human mind.. I seem to pick on people really quickly, so I started to dislike Ginny and what she could be turned into in book 5. Then I read book 6 and could only nod with sadness. Way to ruin a character, JK. Ginny's JK is wrong for Harry in so many levels that I'm not even going there here, lol.
As for the Hermione's profession of love, that's the thing, it is NOT a profession of love. Of romantic love anyway. In her mind it is, but also it's more like lifting a weigh off her shoulders, secure in the knowing that Harry doesn't know and so it's only a friend comforting another. Apparently I didn't do very well on that.
Thanks a bunch for taking the time of reading and reviewing, Brad. It's reviews like yours that makes this a lot better
hugs! |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/12/07
Ah, very good. I always hated Hermione's 'beaming' - I think that was the word - in da Big Kiss scene in HBP. So I loved reading this here:
> you were still beaming thinking about Ginny's
> happiness, but mostly about Harry's happiness,
> and how much he deserved it. It's always been
> about that for you. It's always about him being
> happy and content and safe. What else could you
> do but beam?
Very good!
I'm also only too happy to believe in a Ginny who (a) would quickly forget what she owes Hermione, and who (b) would pick up quickly any vibes that Hermione was now 'competition'. This being the Ginny of HBP who turned on Hermione in the 'Secumsempra' incident, and who was so jealous in DH.
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Author Feedback: "I'm also only too happy to believe in a Ginny who (a) would quickly forget what she owes Hermione, and who (b) would pick up quickly any vibes that Hermione was now 'competition'. This being the Ginny of HBP who turned on Hermione in the 'Secumsempra' incident, and who was so jealous in DH."
That disgusted me, to put it simply. A snapping and ridiculizing Ginny was bad enough, but telling Hermione off like she was someone, when she hardly has 10 lines in 5 books??? Come on, there's no way I can swallow that.  |
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this is probably one of the best h/hr fics i've ever read. it's absolutely heart-wrenching -- i love all of the dialog, your characterizations; it's all wonderful. i'm really hoping you continue, because i'd really like to see where you go with this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/11/07
it is a gud doin story plz ty more of it |
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Can I sing? Weasley is our king! Well, Ron, if you were this way I think everything would be better, yes? I admired him in this chapter and believe me it's not something I tend to do often  Wonderful chapter, Ginny is a jealous blind girl that shouldn't even be taken seriously, I pity her, really, after seeing what Harry and Hermione has, she is nobody. -not actually pitying, but if I had to sympathize, I would - |
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You know, I didn't exaggerate when I said 'your astonishing logic' the previous chapter. I know this because you made a great job confirming that's right.. You have a wonderful way of putting all the pieces together and seeing how damn well it fits, perfect.
This was such a strong chapter, their bond is very strong and oh my god totally going shippy(is that even a word?) here, but they so belong together, the way they love and care each other and the way they complete and comment each other, is jkr crazy? Can someone suck this much at writing romance? Wishing you'd write the whole thing hon |
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Great piece of work yet again. The astonishing logic of yours seems to find answers for everything, since my mind could never make up for why would she help them got together and ended up hating her a little for it, but that's just exactly what Hermione's been feeling then, eh? My dear and very talented writer, another wonderful installment, looking forward to read the third one. I really wonder how you manage to write Hermione that much in character. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 12/08/07
Great! I'm very impressed by this story.
Hermione, Harry and Ron are so nice. I like
this trio so much because they are heartful
and supportive.
Thank you for writing. |
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