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This was a fantastic story and I enjoyed reading it greatly. Found it while filtering through some older stories. What a gem! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 16/08/08
Oh, that was wonderful. The chapter where he's in the love chamber, I was crying! So powerful.  Loved the ending, as well. |
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HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/08
Nice start and great writing
can twai tto see thoer relationship develop |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 26/11/07
i really loved this story...it was sooo sweet and beautiful...this is how the seventh book should of gone, JKR should of had you for input when she wrote it...anyways thanks for writing it and i can't wait to read your other stuff... |
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AWWWW!!! How cute!!! I just have to say that I loved this story and I can't wait to read other stories by you. -  Charmedlily |
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JarnoSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 27/08/07
I find this chapter a wee bit hard to believe. How can they think Malfoy is dead when he's in Hogwarts, that's out in the open in a place filled with kids from Deatheaters like Parkinson.
Also, Harry should never give up his wand. It makes him defenceless and he can't afford that. |
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nim istarSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 07/08/07
loved the story though you really made harry into the stupid male type when it came to hermione, though i must admit it was funny. |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 21/06/07
Very nice! Good effect of romantic tension/attraction there at the end with Harry putting the necklace on Hermione; I guess I'm somewhat inured to the usual Harry-notices-Hermione scenarios, but for some reason the idea of her staring down at her naked neck from behind was quite appealing and did the trick! Oh, not that the 'way her T-shirt stretched' didn't work also ... :-)
But why, why, WHY did you have to imbue Hermione also with a 'blazing look'?!?!?!?! Arrrrgh!! And here am I trying to madly forget Ginny!Sue, she of the Bat-Bogey hex and 'hard, blazing look' guaranteed to conquer chest monsters!
Good chapter! |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
Bravo!... on having Hermione discover Harry's cupboard. One of the few original thoughts I've ever had was Hermione or others discovering the cupboard and finding a crayon drawing on the wall, or something like "my name is Harry and I am six today" inscribed shaky letters, something like that. So it's a particular pleasure to come across someone who's actually done that sort of thing. |
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This was recced at the LJ community harryhermione as part of their Friday recs.
I normally wouldn't comment until the end, but this chapter and the one previous are so excellent that I had to make a comment here.
Wow. I love how you've taken the Godric's Hollow idea and turned the fanon version on its head. You actually made tears come to my eyes with Harry kneeling between his parents' graves and cheering when Hermione went on her rant to her parents.
Great job. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 24 | Date : 08/04/07
Ahh...that was so sweet! You nearly made me cry! 'Tis beautiful, darling, beautiful!
Thank you so much for this story! I love it! Please keep up the great work!
Happy Easter! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 01/04/07
this was a real cliffy! i cant wait till the next part! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 31/03/07
this is really nice, aww, and fluffy, its nice to see. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 31/03/07
they are a really good couple, make a twist were l/j didn't die. holla |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 31/03/07
this was good but a little scary. onw word though- jimmy? |
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