That was fantastic! Especially their scores: "So Cute, It's Creepy". I had read another fic based on the same challenge but yours is definitely better. By the way, the beginning of the chapter (when hermione's on the bathroom), kind of reminded me of gollum, you know the wierd creature from the lord of the rings who talks to himslef and has a double personality, and it was a bit creepy actually |
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Ok! That was cool! I'm glad that you changed the chapter because i did confuse with the first question. |
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Nice Job.
This is one of my fav. fanfis on portkey!
Wait to go *thumbs up* |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/06/06
Cool!!! I finally get to read the ending! Your right though they know each other so well that it is scary! |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/04/06
*squeals* I LOVE THIS FIC!! its soooooooo cute!! and its so funny too!! i loved reading this!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank You!!!!
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This is so gooood! I absolutely love it. Very very cute if I do say so myself. The ending is just so great. Funny how the magazine said the exact same words Hermione's heart was thinking. Turns out they did just that. Harry is absolutely sweet and at the same time a little devil. This story really made me laugh, and I thank you for that. Not many stories I read can make me laugh like this one did. You're an awesome writer so keep it up!  P.S.(be careful of not going down a toilet!  ) |
Author Feedback: Hehe, that would be soooo funny....if it happened to someone else, of course.
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woot woot that was cool, cant wait for the next chapter. |
Author Feedback: You did read the rest, right?
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This is a totally cute story! I love the answers Harry gave. Now I just want to know what Hermione will say. |
Author Feedback: Thank you!!!
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 23/01/06
This was really cute, I loved it! Great job, my dear! |
Author Feedback: Thank you!!!! I love your stories!!! But i know that you know that....
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VicklesSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/01/06
Love the story, it's so cute it creepy! (lol) I always love the stories that involve a quiz or list of some sort, and you have just inspired me to write one of my own. 
Very sweet, very fluffy, nice job!
P.S. For future reference, you can edit a chapter by simply replacing it with a new file instead of removing the chapter. (You go to upload "new chapter" and then from the drop down menu you select the chapter you want to replace - it'll say "exists" next to it. Then you put in the revised file that you want to have show up instead.) That way you can keep your reviews!  |
Author Feedback: THANK YOU!!!!!
I knew there was some way to do it, i just didn't know what it was.
Thank you for your review!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/01/06
it was good to start out with. but you pretty much lost me at the end.
better luck next time |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry you feel that way. I hope it wasn't the repost of Chap. 1 that threw you off.
Thank you for reviewing!!!!
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might have been better if you replaced the chapter rather than added it as a new one coz i really don't want to read the same chapter twice. apart from that it's all good! |
Author Feedback: My reason for that is selfishness.
I was informed of a grave mistake i had made (i had forgotten a question)
but i didn't want to lose all the lovely reviews people had left behind, so i just reposted it. Thank you for telling me though!!!
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/01/06
Nice idea. Haven't read anything like this before. Written well. Rmance, humor and Angst have been combined well. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I like your fics too!!!
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'Harry sat there for a few minutes before he heard shouting coming from the bathroom. Thinking the worse (Death Eaters, Paparazzi, Hermione got flushed down the toilet),'
HAHA I nearly fell over when I read that! That was classic! I loved this fic. Very well done. The questions were great. I loved how he told her that she was the most important person in the world to him too. That was very sweet. Great work! |
Author Feedback: Aww....i love getting reviews from people whose fics i've read!!! They mean a lot to me
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I like this chapter. I like their kiss. I like how well they know each other. I hope you update soon. |
Author Feedback: To be honest, i'm not sure if there's another. There might be an epilogue, there might not. But thank you for these reviews.
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