REALLY good  . I really liked this one. It was literally probably my favorite so far. Nice work  ! |
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bloody fantastic!!! i supppose this rule about having to review to get the story on your favorites is a good thing, because authors get a whole bunch of reveiws, but it sure takes a long time! but i loved your story, which is why i want it on my favs!!! |
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BJUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/06
*pants* WOW. Um...yeah. Wow. I always knew Hermione was a closet tart, but that...was...uh...inspiring? Yeah. Very nice. Very yummy. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/06
HOLY HELL that was HOT!! *Totally* hot! Loved everything about it. Can't really say much of anything articulate right now, I'm still sitting here in shock and awe. VERY nicely done. Man, I can't wait to read more from you, I've just read 6 of your stories and they're all great. Keep em coming.
~Cat |
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Oh, I loved it so so much! I loved the way it was written... it was so full of emotion, and I could almost feel their desire! You're a brilliant writer! I can't wait to read more of your work! Wonderful!
-Michelle |
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Oh, I loved it so so much! I loved the way it was written... it was so full of emotion, and I could almost feel their desire! You're a brilliant writer! I can't wait to read more of your work! Wonderful!
-Michelle |
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that was fairly...good...uhhhhhhhhhh........uhmmmmmmmm....uhhhhhhhhh.....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i suddenly have the urge to AHHHHH!!! SCREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay. now that im done, i can say. this was a fairly AWESOME-YES I SAID AWESOME!!!!-story. I simply love it!!!!!!!! |
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Errrm ! Like wow, like hot, like what an interesting first time smut piece. Fully hot blooded Harry, yeehah  more please. |
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Wow, awesome story dude, I'm a big fan of Harry & Hermione oneshots and yours is one of the best I read!
The seduction was pure brilliance and any fic in which those two get it on gets a thumbs up from me
Keep up the good work, I'm off to read the rest of your fanfics to see if they're just as good!! (Which I'm sure they will be, haha)  |
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LOL! That was great! Though I honestly thought Harry was wanting her after 5 years because it'd been five years since he'd had her. lol |
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That was really amazing. I'm amused at the fact that Ron would help Hermione seduce Harry.  I think it worked though. I loved your Harry! |
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SageSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/06
Okay, good story, but I didn't get the last part. Normally I'm good at understanding these things, but...what?! |
Author Feedback: I'm not exactly sure what you mean. Originally, Ron and Hermione telling Harry that Susan was in labor was a way to get Harry and Hermione alone, but then it turned out that Susan really was in labor. |
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Loved it. Most fics like this follow a certain story line...this one was really original. There aren't enough one-shots like these... |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/06
LOL! Interesting last line! But great fic. But one question if Hermione had no knickers on why would she put on a bra? |
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That was wonderful! Go Hermione! To think she had Ron help her though... But, GO HERMIONE! |
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