I think you should continue this because its so good and i love that its a kind of gradual thing-her liking him! I hope you write another chapter! I LOVE IT

so, quick question, is this the end? anyway, its really rather good and i like the quirk at the end. good luck with the rest and keep up the good work.

update all of your stories. they are reaaally good. update as soon as possible

hey you!
i love this story><
you, my friend
are my favourite
i love all your stories.

loved it ohh my god loved thet he put the last entry loved it it was hilariausly funny are you goig to put anthotehr chpter or these is the end ohh please i would love to see lily do something to james ohh and the hole sirius and her friend i must say it left me a smile on my face

Wowziewow! LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! You should deffo write more chapters - I`d love to read about their first date!

maheen i love your stories they are very good.
i'm not sure about the last diary entry that potter made. but its good anyways

aww maheen your great. geez i wish i could write lol. you need to teach me!
is it possible to teach someone to write good? who knows. probably comes naturally

which jen? hmm maheen? which jen? the jen i know? is that who it is? haha good job

i love this book thinger. thinger's not a word but i don't care. it works

maheen!
errg post the next part please! :]
it was soo good

Hey, I have just read your story and to answer your question I like it. No I love it. It's very good!
but I think, I'd have killed James if he would read my diary. that isn't nice. ohh i would be that angry, but okay, Lily likes him...ok she loves him
it was a cute idea to wrote her diray entries and to let James comment them. really good!!
So, great FF!!
bye bye Anso

Your gettking better and better, so i woulod have to say i love it, i love it a lot.

I love reading what you have to write! You really capture the people and their voices! I dont know how you do it but you've got me wwanting more!!

Start writing more! Please, I'm addicted!! I love reading what you write, your absolutley amazing!!